- Producer16/07/2016Carry meYou come from the lovely country of your childhood Its sweet gardens and its runlets of innocence You come from the broken heart of a brotherhood Growing in absence, half little girl and half silence When night was coming down,...
Comments27/07/2016 #13 Hervé SabattierThank you for your nice words Pamela. Well, I trust it's just a question of love. It's a love story. Though the love from a daughter to her father is certainly different than the love from a lady to her lover or her husband, at the end it's still love. Only love. Only love remains. And to really love, you need to remember and see the world through your child's eyes...27/07/2016 #12 Pamela L. WilliamsAs I read your poem @Hervé Sabattier I had the thought that it was about a young child and the safety that a father brings to them. Then as I read it was the relationship between a man and woman. Then I had the thought; it could be both. The feelings a young girl has for her father is what she looks for in the man she spends her adult life with, that allows her to come in contact with the young girl within the woman. Beautiful! I loved it made me think all of this.24/07/2016 #11 Margaret Aranda, MD, PhD#9 Ahhhh. I beat you to it, so sorry but not really, as I wrote an entire Buzz using Google Translate...sorry for that hit. BUt even with the computer program, the translation was super startling in its depth. And I have requested a translation not just for me, but at your decision so we can all see what you see. Here's the English translation, choppy yet pure: https://www.bebee.com/producer/@margaret-aranda/the-miracle-of-love and I was inspired to write my own poem in response, however un-elegant in English, sir @@Hervé Sabattier, please forgive me: My Subsequent Poem: The Gift at Bay: https://www.bebee.com/producer/@margaret-aranda/the-gift-at-bay . What love in the beeeHive reigns today!17/07/2016 #8 Joanna HofmanYour poem " Carry me" is a beautiful way to express the emotions which we keep deeply like a wish in our inner world. many moons ago I was hit by Pablo Neruda :
"Don't go far off, not even for a day, because --
because -- I don't know how to say it: a day is long
and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station
when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep. "
But today I was touched by poem of Herve Sabattier ! Merci !17/07/2016 #7 Anonymous#5 Why yes, your line breaks always appear conscious, and yet so elegantly understated. Pure beauty. :) In this one, I love the idea of this one line "Invent me once again.." Lovely, @Hervé Sabattier View more#5 Why yes, your line breaks always appear conscious, and yet so elegantly understated. Pure beauty. :) In this one, I love the idea of this one line "Invent me once again.." Lovely, @Hervé Sabattier! I wish my French was better then I could read all of your writing! ;) Close