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Ghosts (The writing kind)

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Ask questions, get guidance, talk about the trials and tribulations of the writer's life.

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  1. ProducerJoyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    The Travails of Ghostwriting
    The Travails of GhostwritingI am learning the ropes of ghostwriting. We have some wonderful writers here on  bebee.com, so the path is easier. Some of the realizations that have smacked me in the head have come hard. It has given me the basis for questions to ask...


    Anne 🐝 Thornley-Brown, MBA
    26/05/2017 #32 Anne 🐝 Thornley-Brown, MBA
    #27 I had this experience. I was engaged as a blogger. Then, they asked if they could run some of the posts "uncredited". Next thing they are crediting their own employees as the writer and some content appeared on other sites. That's when I put my foot down.

    Rates from now on will be clearly spelled out 2X the rate I gave them for the uncredited pieces, 4X if they want to credit an employee.

    If they want to run it on another site, it will be 1X the rate per usage if I am credited, 4X the rate if uncredited, and 8X the rate if they want to credit it to an employee. A full buyout will be 12 times the rate. I am really not interested in doing ghost writing.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #31 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #30 many thanks to @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian and @phil friedman for information. I think coupled with what I've learned, we've got it all.
    Gerald Hecht
    23/05/2017 #30 Gerald Hecht
    #20 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee The comments generated by this piece are proving to be a treasure trove of useful (for me anyway) tips and information! I think I've learned more about writing, the "ghost paradox" (of your post), and pragmatic solutions for it...and how to more effectively use SM (in general) --all in one engagement session; than I've ever learned. Thank you for initiating this exchange/seminar (and I'm NOT joking) Joyce!
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #29 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #24 "Why me?" has been haunting me all night. It's because if the story is not told, it can happen again. The children's stories break my heart. I am still in touch with one--now grown into a wonderful, angry woman. I can give her some peace. I can grab all the victims and give them a literal hug. It's for them.

    I drove myself to learn writing for them--not for me.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #28 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #27 understood. If I do do the job I am hoping for with this client, I am hoping he will promote me. He is a sweet intelligent man. I adore him like a son. I am so very proud of him. My wish to do the very best job I can for him stems from the family connection. I know once I experience this I can do the very best job possible for any client. I can make a living at something I love. He has given me a great opportunity. He is a wow lawyer. I push him to use bebee.com at every opportunity.
    Lynne Black
    23/05/2017 #27 Lynne Black
    I've done both ghost writing and freelance writing and I find often clients don't disclose to you that you're hired as a ghost writer and later you see your work published that you don't get credit for. It's a catch 22 - ghost writing can help build your resume, however you don't get the notoriety that you would on articles you publish or write for clients. Even though you're presently working as a Ghost Writer for your relative that is a lawyer, you should continue to pursue other freelance writing opportunities and not put all your eggs in one basket - this is only one job.
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    23/05/2017 #26 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    It has to be a catch 22 to be a ghost writer. Congrats to you for garnering a job with your relative who's a lawyer. I'm going to guess that if you write for the right people then your reputation speaks for itself and word spreads. Keep it up, you just be beginning a new chapter in your life!
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #25 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #24 Okay--some of what @Timothy welch was true. "Unless you don't like the notoriety nor want your name everywhere..." I've been in the spotlight. I've been in the news. I didn't like it. I've been in seclusion for decades hoping people would forget. I now realize while I'm waiting for people to die off, I'm dying off, too. My post Deception lays out the bones of the story I have to finish. I just really want to live a quiet life and make enough for food and shelter. If I finish my book and get it published, my brand would be complete, but any chance for a quiet life would be gone. I know the story should be told, but, "Why me?"
    Anne 🐝 Thornley-Brown, MBA
    23/05/2017 #24 Anne 🐝 Thornley-Brown, MBA
    I see little upside to ghostwriting as it does not help you build your brand and portfolio. The compensation would have to be significant to make up for this.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #23 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #22 I have been published under my name. Most has been free. I've never been a big one for making a buck. Now I need money and I have a skill for sale. Bigtime publishing is a bear. There are many, many writers out there to compete against. Seeing your name in print gets old fast. I simply have a love for the craft and now have the opportunity to get paid to do what I love. Yea--I have a big time story to sell on the sidelines, but I'm having a hard time finishing it up. In the meantime, eating becomes extremely important. Yea--I agree--you watch too many movies.
    Timothy welch
    23/05/2017 #22 Timothy welch
    I could never wrap my head around ghostwriting. WHy be incognito when you can just publish your own material undr own name? Unless you dont like the notoriety nor want your name everywhere or you under the custody of the FBI and hiding from the mafia and you are in disguise like the Witness protection program( yeah I watch too much James bond movies)
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #21 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    https://www.bebee.com/producer/@joyce-bowen/deception is a very careful legal dance. I printed out a copy he could see with all the supportive documentation printed out. (I know people don't often click on links.) This was essentially my resume. Any lawyer can see why I constructed it as I did.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #20 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #18 Loved it, Gerald.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #19 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #11 I'm probably too soft. The guy wanted to flip me out a check for the entire rest of the year, but my superego stepped in and said wait until you see the first blog. I had urged him to check out two of my blog entries here and he did, I suppose. I just want to be sure he doesn't kick himself later. I know I'm good, but it's been a while since I traipsed around law books.
    Gerald Hecht
    23/05/2017 #18 Gerald Hecht
    #15 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee my comment wasn't (entirely) meant to be evil...I don't know --the more I thought about it, the more I thought it really might be crazy enough to work; and the successful execution of the plan wouldn't really be evil...but --you find out its probable legal status through continued ghosting for litigators. Anyway, just trying to be funny and it turned into an outline for a screenplay as it went on.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #16 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #10 Great, Gert. Thanks for taking the time to search for me.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #15 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #13 chuckle and a half, Gerald. You are certainly evil. I just want to make a living doing what I love. I have a book woven into my word processor that I need to finish up, but it's on heinous child abuse, and the topic is emotionally straining. I love the idea of doing something as innocuous as ghostwriting.
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/05/2017 #14 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #12 I've landed the work as I mentioned in here https://www.bebee.com/producer/@joyce-bowen/ghostwriting-and-other-adventures. I'm ghostwriting one blog at the moment; hopefully, that will translate into more.

    This is all great information. I was hoping for such stuff. I found it difficult to be stumbling around trying to figure it out on my own. @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian gave me the lowdown after I asked him some questions after I realized I could not reference the work as mine in any way.
    Gerald Hecht
    23/05/2017 #13 Gerald Hecht
    You could also only publish your own stuff under a pen name; then, once you have amassed a very large body of highly acclaimed work, you pull out the "big guns"...reveal (using your pen name) everything you've ghostwritten and everybody you've ghostwritten for...then using your real name --get all of the people you've ghosted for to join you in a class action suit against your "alter ego"...for their despicable and heinous dishonesty.

    I've no idea what the result would be...but its food for "legal thriller" fiction, IMO!
  2. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    The important thing is to keep challenging the brain to new thoughts and to new patterns, to keep pushing its limits, to keep stretching it and to keep learning new forms.
    Gary Sharpe
    Creative and Art Therapies for Parkinson's Disease
    www.outthinkingparkinsons.com Modern brain science now tells us that engaging in the creative arts, especially when, in the process, we find ourselves in that para-sympathetic state called "Flow" or "in the Zone", not only prevents neuro-degeneration but also actually...
  3. Alexa Steele

    Alexa Steele

    By what metric should a writer assign value to her product? Share your thoughts...
    Alexa Steele
    What should copywriting cost? Or, what's the value of a written word?
    www.thewebsitewordsmith.com American copywriter Alexa Steele explores the question so many freelance writers wrestle with: what should my copywriting...
  4. ProducerAlexa Steele

    Alexa Steele

    What's the value of a written word?
    What's the value of a written word?I sat there–laptop open, TV on–pondering that most awful of entrepreneurial questions: How much should I charge?You’d think after nearly a decade as a professional word slinger I’d know how to price my services. And sure, I learned long ago not to...


    Mohammed Sultan
    25/01/2017 #15 Mohammed Sultan
    #14 Alex,thank you for your reply-I understand that copy writing is part of creative advertising and the storyboard which is conveyed by the voice over of your commercial,not as business blogging.It's not only informative but also inducing and persuasive,and its effect can be measured,evaluated and developed.
    Business blogging can be considered as part of PR but copy writing is the heart of any advertising strategy and is also crucial link in the innovation process, when converting generated ideas into successful product concepts.The role of the copy writer is to ensure what he is writing is consistent with the org vision created and the image he crafted in customers mind.So,his role is evaluated , rated and developed along with the org vision and image dimensions related to their market.
    Alexa Steele
    25/01/2017 #14 Alexa Steele
    #12 Mohammed, thank you for your comment, though I'm not sure I'm following your train of thought.

    The kind of blogs I write for are business blogs. Just as with copywriting, I have to take into account market insights and the customer's perception. My goal is to provide information the customer finds useful or interesting to subtly promote the product or service. It is different from ad copy because it provides more substance and a softer sell, but it is not like personal or opinion blogging, where the blogger writes strictly from his or her own perspective.
    Alexa Steele
    25/01/2017 #13 Alexa Steele
    #11 Interesting thoughts to consider, Harvey.

    Copywriting is definitely a part that fits into a whole, and I always encourage businesses to bring us in at the beginning of the project, not the end. (It's never good to hear "The graphic design leaves room for exactly this many words." )

    I'm not sure how it is for other trades, but in this business, more sophisticated customers are better. They are the ones that appreciate substantive writing, proper grammar, and a clever turn of phrase. Less sophisticated customers tend to look only at word count. That difference (plus available budget) is why some copywriters make $.01 per word while others can charge $200/hour.

    But as to your final point, you're right. I can create the most substantive, well-written, clever bit of content there ever was, if no one reads it, it won't bring you business. Therefore, to you it's worthless.
    Mohammed Sultan
    25/01/2017 #12 Mohammed Sultan
    The difference between blogging and copy writing is like the difference between selling and marketing.The first works for the interest of the seller(the blogger) and depends to a large degree on his own perception ,and the second works for the interest of the audience (the customer) and depends to large extent on market insights and the perception of the customer .To change the audience mind the blogger should change his perception first while the copy writer can't change customers mind unless he shed out the idea that already stuck in their mind and replace it,through market insights, with his new idea.Both need several manipulations and several impressions in the audience/the reader mind too.
    Harvey Lloyd
    25/01/2017 #11 Harvey Lloyd
    I believe this is a question small business asks everyday. In all trades and crafts i would think competition is always the issue. Battling for or trying to find the customer. This being said i would think, an opinion, that your craft is one that is part of whole. Being able to demonstrate to potential clients how you fit into the whole and what happens when you are not present, would be the approach.

    If you sell by the word and not the outcome then it will most likely always be about price. This maybe preaching to the choir as i am sure you have already thought through this aspect. What did Zig Ziegler say, "Sell the sizzle not the steak". I would also imagine the more sophisticated your customer the less the price will be, more work less price. The less sophisticated your customer the more they will lean on you for add on services, due to their need of the whole or being a complete service. Higher prices.

    As one of a few million in small business. Words have to turn into eyes, engagement and revenues. How can i see that connection from the words?
    Don 🐝 Kerr
    25/01/2017 #10 Don 🐝 Kerr
    #9 Based on some of the clients with whom I've worked (mercifully few) I'd suspect maybe $2.40 based upon the $.80/word pricing model?
    Alexa Steele
    24/01/2017 #9 Alexa Steele
    #8 Speaking of short and pithy, I had one of my LinkedIn connections point out that Nike's "Just Do It" is only 3 words...how much do you think that copywriter got paid?
    Don 🐝 Kerr
    24/01/2017 #8 Don 🐝 Kerr
    @Alexa Steele A good and timely piece as I am pondering the same question. I think @Paul Walters nailed it. I might fly a little under his hourly for certain work - charitable organizations, fun stuff I just want to do BUT, often writing short, pithy stuff is more difficult than longer material so I never undercut myself on that front. And, I've posted enough here on the plague that is speculative work. I will not do it - ever.
    Ken Boddie
    24/01/2017 #7 Ken Boddie
    #5 Think of getting sucked into doing low price work like a vortex, a negative price spiral. Once you're in, you go further down and down, then it's near on impossible to get out. Let your cheaper competitors fight it out for low prices. I would look for a niche market to which you can bring something unique. It's easier to charge more if you are different from all the other milk bottles on the wall.
    Zacharias 🐝 Voulgaris
    24/01/2017 #6 Zacharias 🐝 Voulgaris
    I don't. I let the other bees do that :-)
    Great article. Thanks for sharing.
    Alexa Steele
    23/01/2017 #5 Alexa Steele
    #2 Hi @Ken Boddie. Good advice. I haven't had to turn down work, per se, recently. These days, I just scare them off with pricing that looks outrageous if you've ever only worked with monkeys. (And yet I don't get anywhere near those big agency fees Paul's talking about.) But like I said in the article, it can be hard to stick to your guns when several prospects in a row turn tail and run.
    Alexa Steele
    23/01/2017 #4 Alexa Steele
    #1 Thank you, Paul.

    Bidding sites like Upwork (formerly Elance) are awful. I find myself checking them out every couple years to see if they've changed, but no, your experience is pretty typical. I think prostitution would be more lucrative...
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    23/01/2017 #3 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    The wrong words of British Legal system were corrected from "Hanged" to "Hang until Death".

    Well, the right words of Gandhiji got us United for Freedom.

    The US had recently changed 2 words in a climate change conference, changing the entire context of a 500 page + agreement.

    Here in India we are so good with words that no work gets done, we have to be better to actually get work done.

    Words are invaluable. Words can build a context that can change the meaning of a single word.

    As marketers, negotiators, trainers, speakers, Corporate professionals, social workers, social animals etc etc ... We are constantly reinventing words, there are countless possibilities but few which get the work done.

    It is possible that a lot of hardwork goes down the drain because someone comes up with something totally unacceptable which is tried by everyone purely out of curiosity and not utility or vice versa.

    Words are invaluable, but not at the cost of losing one's mind over failures. The mind can make invaluable words worthless. Keep thinking

    This is not a comment, but a spontaneous warm up to build contexts, till then whatever I have blurted is bullshit. I can prove it :)
    Ken Boddie
    23/01/2017 #2 Ken Boddie
    Interesting question, Alexa. I cannot answer from a professional writer's perspective but have spent a long career selling consulting services, including technical reports. The market will always dictate the credible range of charges - charge too much and you miss out on work - too little and you're working for nothing and lose respect to boot. As in all services, you must find out what market you are servicing and also know your clients and competitors well. @Paul Walters has given some dollar pointers but these will vary from location to location and from client to client. As Paul suggests, sometimes you need to be willing to walk away from a farcical request for proposal in which you are being taken for granted. If the client wants to pay peanuts then he/she has no appreciation for what he/she is getting (some potential for education here perhaps?) or else he/she is truly happy to get monkeys to do the work and just wants a ticked box result.
    Paul Walters
    23/01/2017 #1 Paul Walters
    cool article @Alexa Steele vexing questions indeed . I was tempted last year to go onto a site called Upwork where one has to 'bid' for a project . One on reply I remember was to write five speeches of 1000 words each .....the budget $200 . I kind of thought that dude was being cheap offering only $0.20 cents a word. Turns out it was $ 200 for all five speeches...Write your own bloody speeches was my terse reply ! Somebody though will probably do it meaning our profession is yet again cheapened . As a copywriter in the 'big agency world' I was hired out at $200 p/h and then when I had my own agency I hired myself out at $280 p/h .....I think thats fair ....after all its THEIR product I am spruiking. These days I scribble ( in between books) for airline in flight magazines ... the pay varies between $0.22c to $0.80c pr word....

    I considered prostitution but really I have to say I faiued at that!!!
  5. Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    Hey, everybody. I have room for 2 or 3 new clients. If you need a writer, copywriter, social strategist., or the like give me a holler

    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian


    Alexa Steele
    05/11/2016 #10 Alexa Steele
    #8 I agree. I wouldn't want to see any sort of bidding wars on beBee; however, some basic pricing guidelines (a la AWAI's copywriting price guide) might be appreciated by both service providers and prospective clients.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    05/11/2016 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Sharing and promoting.
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    05/11/2016 #8 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    I would hold off on a Writers' Market Hive until we get the ability to pin posts to first position (so that the posting rules can be clearly seen) and the ability for hive owners/admins to delete off-topic or non-conforming buzzes.

    I would see the hive as a simple place where writers can post an "ad" type of image, a link to their portfolio/Producer page, and a bio/capabilities statement.

    I would not want to get into rates, bidding on jobs, etc. That's what fivr is for (giggle)

    I would not list client work. For me it would be impossible anyway... I don't have client work, THEY do. That's what a ghost is.

    For others, listing client work is an invitation to poachers
    Blanca Almanza Oz
    05/11/2016 #6 Blanca Almanza Oz
    I'm ghostwriter freelance in spanish. I loved write & dreamer
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    05/11/2016 #5 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Reposting for @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian, he does so much to help so many of us!!
    Alexa Steele
    04/11/2016 #4 Alexa Steele
    #3 Thanks!

    I like the idea of a writer's market, A hive maybe?

    I don't stick to one niche (more on that here: http://www.thewebsitewordsmith.com/good-content-writing-begins-reading-great-source-material.html) but healthcare is definitely one of my strongest subjects.
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    04/11/2016 #3 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #1 Now, you're one classy lady, Alexa. Thanks.

    I try to keep a small number of clients because I have so much other stuff on my plate.

    What's your niche? Maybe we can create a writers' market on beBee
    Alexa Steele
    04/11/2016 #2 Alexa Steele
    That's supposed to say "tech savvy."
    Alexa Steele
    04/11/2016 #1 Alexa Steele
    Promoting the competition in hopes the favor will one day be returned (plus he's a damn good writer and more the savvy than I).
  6. ProducerGary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    Supernova Eternities
    Supernova EternitiesAs I fast approach the first 100,000 reads of my Niume articles, there may be an explosion of activity from me as, counter-intuitively, I pause for thought.Indeed, I do need to spend some time today Gathering My Thoughts. Quite literally in...
  7. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    We know that engaging in creative processes, especially when doing so puts into that para-sympathetic state of Flow, not only prevents neuro-degeneration but also encourages neuronal growth. However, it seems that the brain quickly gets used to doing the same thing over and over, so whilst things like Soduko puzzles can help at first, they become learned behaviors and can be done semi-automatically. For this reason, they stop being quite as effective. The important thing is to keep challenging the brain to new thoughts. For me, my Flow process is in Creative Writing. But I realized I have not been stretching myself, focussed only on writing about Out-Thinking Parkinson's. So this is why I have started writing on Niume, a collaborative blogging platform which has several themed areas of Spheres. I have challenged myself to write articles for each of these themes and to stretch my creative writing skills and range.
    Gary Sharpe
    "The Gap Series" by Stephen Donaldson
    niume.com I'm loving the Niume collaborative blogging platform because it allows me to fulfill my desire to simply write... and write... and write... about everything and anything... prolifically... without overloading the newsfeed... because the different...
  8. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe
    Publish on LinkedIn? Try Niume too!
    www.linkedin.com Have you ever been "sold" anything due to a "broadcast" tweet? Me neither. I have, however, just a couple of times, been introduced to something new and of interest by companies tweeting me...
  9. ProducerCainFinity Acceso
    Social networks affecting adolescents health
    Social networks affecting adolescents healthBY CAINFINITY ON JULY 29, 2016As technology keeps advancing in today's society, the dangers of social networks will keep increasing. Most people depend on technology, and with it comes the thousands and thousands of social networks that have become...
  10. ProducerCainFinity Acceso
    The Do's and dont's of dressing professionally
    The Do's and dont's of dressing professionallyBY CAINFINITY ON JULY 11, 2016 The first impression is everything, whether it be a first day on the job or the interview. The first thing that people look at is your appearance, and whether it may not be fair or just, a person...
  11. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    @Deb 🐝 Helfrich first became aware of Gary on August 19th 2015 after @Jeffrey Strickland left a comment on one of Gary’s blogs published on LinkedIn. Deb’s interest in Gary was piqued when, unusually, he did not request to become part of her own LinkedIn network even after she contributed several insightful comments on his posts. When Gary published an article about why he liked to write on LinkedIn, Deb felt it was time to get connected…" cc @Trent Selbrede who also featured prominently

    - an excerpt from http://www.outthinkingparkinsons.com/downloads/heartwarming
    Gary Sharpe
    Why I Write on LinkedIn.
    www.linkedin.com This article was first published in September 2015. It now forms the opening chapter of our new book "The Heartwarming Story of the Unfolding of a Rigid...


    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    29/07/2016 #5 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #3 That is why I keep writing about the commenting, @John White, MBA. I want to encourage all the readers out there to dip their toes in. The is a wide world of people and opportunities out there & beBee is a gateway to bring goals and dreams to reality!
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    29/07/2016 #4 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #2 In so many ways, @Dean Owen... Add in the chronic disease, the new business, and the ease of goggle hangouts and we have a new twist on Sleepless in Seattle. I actually tweet Tom Hanks occasionally...trying to get to Nia Vardalos :)
    John White, MBA
    29/07/2016 #3 John White, MBA
    #1 OMG, @Deb 🐝 Helfrich, I love this comment and I'm just so happy for you and @Gary Sharpe. We are all glad you forced yourself out of your comfort zone. I've done it a few times in life, as well, and have always found it to be rewarding. Keep on buzzin, my friend!
    Dean Owen
    29/07/2016 #2 Dean Owen
    A 21st Century Love Story....
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    29/07/2016 #1 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    I certainly never imagined what would occur last year when I forced myself to use social media to find clients.... What I found was an entirely new life.
  12. ProducerPedro 🐝 Casanova
    Smiling in a Friday…( a fiction tale )
    Smiling in a Friday…( a fiction tale )…Bernie and Joey were friends…since childhood…both were working at the same IT company just in different departments… One day Joey got a reward after a long time hardworking season. An advanced course of a subject he was longing to learn....
  13. ProducerCainFinity Acceso
    Tricks and tips to kick up the gear in a workout
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  14. ProducerCainFinity Acceso
    Why is a workout routine important?
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  15. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    More excellent reviews of our e-book "The Heartwarming Story of the Unfolding of a Rigid Man" are in! Find it on Amazon Kindle. Gary Sharpe
  16. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    Thanks to @Cheryl Snapp Conner for writing this article about @Deb 🐝 Helfrich and I for the Forbes website!
    Gary Sharpe
    Forbes Welcome
    www.forbes.com This is a real-life Sleepless in Seattle situation, with visa issues and travel costs prohibiting these two cofounders from fulfilling their desire to spend the rest of their lives not only as business partners, but as husband and...
  17. Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    @Gary Sharpe continues to show what he is made of - and it is love...
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    THIS is what TRUE LOVE is
    www.linkedin.com DISCLAIMER The words herein are about two people drawn together by the irresistible magnetic attraction of soulmates. Please read this post at your own risk: this True Love story may impact on...


    Stephanie Lamoureux
    02/07/2016 #5 Anonymous
    Youre so welcome! I firmly believe that everything happens for a reason and people do not come in contact with one another by accident! @Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    02/07/2016 #4 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #3 Thanks so much, @Stephanie Lamoureux. We feel a great deal of gratitude for the ways our lives have changed simply by starting up a conversation about 9 months ago.
    Stephanie Lamoureux
    02/07/2016 #3 Anonymous
    Wonderful. True love is elusive for most. You are lucky to have found one another.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    24/06/2016 #2 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #1 What a fabulous quote from a very wise woman, @Joanna Hofman! We appreciate your support of our story.
  18. ProducerPaul "Pablo" Croubalian
    Hacking the Flesch! (Reading Ease Test)
    Hacking the Flesch! (Reading Ease Test)The most common measures of reading simplicity are the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level Test, followed by the Flesch Reading Ease Test. Too bad few know how they work.Let's fix that. Flesch originally proposed the Reading Ease Test back in 1948. In...


    Kevin Pashuk
    31/08/2016 #29 Kevin Pashuk
    #28 You... say... that... @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian... like... it's... a... bad... thing...
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    31/08/2016 #28 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #12 Yes. Just... Don't... End... Up... Talking...Like... Captain... Kirk...
    Denise🐝 Da Vinha Ricieri
    31/08/2016 #27 Denise🐝 Da Vinha Ricieri
    It's amazing! Math for how writing in a correct proporcion. Never cross my mind that formulas like that one can even exist. And in a second thought, it makes sense to me...Thanks, professor!
    Renee Rosenmann
    03/07/2016 #26 Renee Rosenmann
    #23 You are most welcome. Looking forward to much more!
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    30/06/2016 #25 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #24 Well, I wouldn't say they suck, John. Many people (but definitely not all) shy away from big blocks of text and complex sentence structures. I prefer simple but not simplistic. It takes some getting used to. Eventually, you just use hemingwayapp as a final touch up.
    John Valledor
    30/06/2016 #24 John Valledor
    Paul, again your knowledge surprises me. Now I know why my articles suck! Too wordy, long sentences, too many adjectives and adverbs. Ugh! I'll play with your hemingway app suggestion. Thank you!
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    27/06/2016 #23 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #22 Thanks for the compliment, @Renee Rosenmann
    Renee Rosenmann
    27/06/2016 #22 Renee Rosenmann
    Paul, I adore your work!
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    24/06/2016 #21 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #20 I agree that email is not the best medium for it. I get nearly 1000 a day. If it wasn't for rules and folders, I wouldn't even notice clients' emails. Email is so passé.... And that's an Old Fart saying that.
    Pascal Derrien
    24/06/2016 #20 Pascal Derrien
    #18 that's actually the problem I dont get most of them or they end up in my junk box would be more efficient if message platform was used as channel I have already flagged it and made that suggestion that's one dashboard only
    Phil Friedman
    24/06/2016 #19 Phil Friedman
    #18 Yea, and you can alway change your mind later ... although I haven't yet, and don't expect to.:-)
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    24/06/2016 #18 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #17 From a writer's Producer page, you can subscribe to his/her posts. Just click on their name in the Producer listing and select "subscribe to this blog"
    Pascal Derrien
    24/06/2016 #17 Pascal Derrien
    As an aside I have seen this article only by accident as beBee is scaling up I tend to miss stuff now but back to the topic and just as well we have people like @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian to educate us as I am fairly intuitive type of individual and don't use plans techniques etc..but I tend to keep it simple so I suppose I am not that wrong :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    21/06/2016 #16 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    I was waiting for you to mention Hemingway @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian. OMG, I can't seem to write less, as in wtf? My last buzz was full of info but it must have bored most because it was fairly dry due to all the facts I used. I need to practice these techniques more. You are an excellent teacher my friend, and I need to be a better student ;-)
    Denise🐝 Da Vinha Ricieri
    21/06/2016 #14 Denise🐝 Da Vinha Ricieri
    Just a-m-a-z-i-n-g!
    Ewan Muirhead
    20/06/2016 #13 Ewan Muirhead
    Love this @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian, been thinking about how to pitch writing style - very useful
    Gert Scholtz
    20/06/2016 #12 Gert Scholtz
    @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian. Thank you Paul. The Hemingway app is extremely useful - I never knew about it. So. From. Now. Short sentences.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    20/06/2016 #11 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for this useful information @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian. I use the Hemingway app and find it to be quite useful. I am an adverb user and I am trying to cut down my use of them.
    Madeline Anderson-Balmer
    20/06/2016 #10 Madeline Anderson-Balmer
    Wondering if there are new ways to fine tune your writing? Try this reading ease approach. It really does make a difference.
  19. Louise Smith

    Louise Smith

    @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian THANKYOU FOR BEING SUCH A GOOD SPORT ! Sorry I didn't I know I should have consulted you first! THANK YOU ! Keyed Out Problems of @Paul Pablo Croubalianhttps://www.bebee.com/producer/@louise-smith-state-of-queensland/keyed-out-problems-of-paul-pablo-croubalian
    DJ Antoine - Thank You (Official Video HD)
    DJ Antoine - Thank You (Official Video HD) DOWNLOAD & STREAM HERE: http://bit.ly/DJAntoine-ThankYou PRE-ORDER DJ ANTOINE’s NEW ALBUM 'PROVOCATEUR‘ HERE: http://kontorrecords.de/Provocateur LYRICS...
  20. ProducerLouise Smith

    Louise Smith

    Keyed Out Problems of  @Paul Pablo Croubalian
    Keyed Out Problems of @Paul Pablo Croubalian Written in Response to How Much will the Equity of our beBee Ambassadors be Worth by @Juan Imaz  WARNING: Totally Off the Original Topic Something bad happened ! Paul "Pablo"...


    Louise Smith
    20/06/2016 #11 Louise Smith
    Now we know @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian how you got in the door - 2nd picture from the left ! As self-annotated below"

    "Today in my mother-in-law's 85th birthday. It's also the day after the doctor gave me the OK to ditch the sling. That thing was holding my right arm for the last 10 days. I dislocated my shoulder. Yes, I was doing something stupid at the time. Surprise! "

    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/06/2016 #10 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    This is cute amd funny @Louise Smith
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    19/06/2016 #9 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    #7 tags work in comments but seem to have no effect in a post. That's a good thing. Otherwise notification-overload will be a real porblem
    Louise Smith
    19/06/2016 #8 Louise Smith
    #6 But glad you got here @Aleta Curry !
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/06/2016 #7 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #5 @Paul "Pablo" Croubalian, glad to hear it wasn't cold and you were able to work outdoors until she came home. Your tag worked, I was alerted. Maybe it depends on how many comments or how far down the tag is within a comment? "Funny poop happens," I like that one!
    Aleta Curry
    19/06/2016 #6 Aleta Curry
    Okay - I got nothing!
    Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    19/06/2016 #5 Paul "Pablo" Croubalian
    ROTFL.... Of course, now, at my age , I can't get up.... The "hidden spare" was the old key. I've been known to pull some stunts as well, so I couldn't very well get upset. Also, I had my laptop and my cell phone, so I was "at the office." I set up on the patio and worked until her return

    No harm no foul. This has to be filed under, "Funny Poop Happens."

    @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher, I can't say I was happy about it, but the annoyance lasted a minute or two. Sure, if it was cold or rainy, the annoyance may have lasted a wee bit longer. Then I moved on with the day. As @Aleta Curry says, it's good to have a warped sense of humour sometimes.

    Interesting side note: I don't think all those in-post tags actually do anything to notify me. I was told about this post from Javier's comment.
    Javier 🐝 beBee
    19/06/2016 #4 Javier 🐝 beBee
    #2 @Louise Smith you are totally right !! :)
    Dean Owen
    19/06/2016 #3 Dean Owen
    Oh this is the type of content I live for. Glad you made this into a post as I missed the original exchange! Rock on Filomena! Oh, by the way, love the JJ video!
    Louise Smith
    19/06/2016 #2 Louise Smith
    #1 Don't think he can miss it @Javier 🐝 beBee ! His tag is plastered through it !
  21. Gary Sharpe

    Gary Sharpe

    Interesting and thought provoking new article by @Deb 🐝 Helfrich - novel uses for grapefruit spoons - and what this means for applied neuroplasticity
    Gary Sharpe
    Grapefruit Spoons & Gratitude
    www.outthinkingparkinsons.com Exercising our neural pathways not only makes life easier, but it induces health in and of itself, because brains are meant to be used every single second of our...
  22. ProducerNess Campagnaro

    Ness Campagnaro

    Confucius Say...' Walk Sprightly Like A Pigeon and Sit Like a Tortoise.'
    Confucius Say...' Walk Sprightly Like A Pigeon and Sit Like a Tortoise.'No, its not the sequel to 'Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.' This piece has nothing to do with jewellery, but everything to do with people's obsession in today's world. TIME. And the want for more of it. I need to be 'more' pretty (to get the...


    Oliver Moloney
    26/05/2016 #1 Oliver Moloney
    Confucius always opens up interesting dialogue amongst me and my friends. Might I recommend some of ther work of Alan Watts? His writing is a touch more contemporary than that of some of the great (old) sages! Thanks for posting this @Ness Campagnaro
  23. ProducerSteven Davies

    Steven Davies

    What is semantic copy?
    What is semantic copy?Hello Bees! I've been away a little while but I'm back now. I'm currently upto my elbows researching for a piece I intend to write concerning the UK referendum on our EU membership. It is a little bit of hot topic here as you can well imagine and I...


    Steven Davies
    23/05/2016 #9 Steven Davies
    #4 Thanks again for the link, @Catalina Serrano - I've taken a look and filled out the form.
    Steven Davies
    23/05/2016 #8 Steven Davies
    #6 oh I agree completely Navinya, we would be shouting into an empty well otherwise. I'm hoping to have another post up tomorrow, if not this evening.
    Steven Davies
    23/05/2016 #7 Steven Davies
    #4 i haven't heard of beBee ambassadors before - I'll take a look at that, thanks.
    Navinya Lee
    23/05/2016 #6 Navinya Lee
    Thats great information @Steven Davies. I think knowing and specifically targeting your audience is the most important stage to take before any other :-) When can we expect your next post?
    Steven Davies
    23/05/2016 #5 Steven Davies
    #3 that is very kind of you, Susan, thank you.
    Catalina Serrano
    23/05/2016 #4 Catalina Serrano
    #2 It would be worth your while! Have you checked this: https://www.bebee.com/ambassadors ? It is a great opportunity!
    Susan Clark
    23/05/2016 #3 Susan Clark
    I find this to be very useful, it is true that technology development has gone so far that anyone has access to anything now therefore there are more options for stealing someones work. Thank you for the share and solution suggestion Steven, I would be proud of my work too if I was you.
    Steven Davies
    23/05/2016 #2 Steven Davies
    #1 Catalina, I must make more of an effort to check in each day :)
    Catalina Serrano
    23/05/2016 #1 Catalina Serrano
    Excellent post Steven, welcome back to beBee!
  24. ProducerKen Boddie

    Ken Boddie

    Ssssssoooo Good to Ssssssee You!
    Ssssssoooo Good to Ssssssee You!"Slippin' and a-slidin', peepin' and a-hidin', ""Been told a long time ago-ho-ho-oh-woh."I guess when Buddy Holly sang his cover of this famous Little Richard hit, way back in 1956, he was thinking of Linda of "solid sender" fame, hoping she'd...


    Sara Jacobovici
    23/05/2016 #8 Sara Jacobovici
    #7 I smiled right through your comment @Ken Boddie. Thanks for that.
    Ken Boddie
    23/05/2016 #7 Ken Boddie
    Good to have you "Rock Around the Clock" with me, Sara, even though you are only a spring chicken. I assume you remember the daddy of rock 'n roll, Bill Haley, and his Comets of course. Incidentally, I'll take your 1956 and raise you 7. Thanks for stopping by and "See You Later, Alligator!" 🐊 #6
    Sara Jacobovici
    23/05/2016 #6 Sara Jacobovici
    Nice slice of life story @Ken Boddie. My comment is in reference to your opening. Oh how you young folks refer to 1956 as "way back". I was born way back then, and live to tell about it! I am happy to say too that I grew up with some of the finest music ever (no snakes, just a lot of good music).
    Ken Boddie
    23/05/2016 #5 Ken Boddie
    Thanks for the shares, @Daniela Umpierrez 👍
    Ken Boddie
    22/05/2016 #4 Ken Boddie
    Better a chick magnet than a snake magnet, Charles. Love bites beat fang bites. 🐍
    Chas ✌️ Wyatt
    22/05/2016 #3 Chas ✌️ Wyatt
    @Ken Boddie, Snakes have an affinity for me, not I for them. I have never been bitten, but, by default of proximity and means, I should have been. I seem to be a snake magnet whenever I range in their territory.
    Ken Boddie
    21/05/2016 #2 Ken Boddie
    He turned his nose up at durian also. #1
    Dean Owen
    21/05/2016 #1 Dean Owen
    Disappointed you didn't make a meal of Monty!
  25. ProducerPascal Derrien

    Pascal Derrien

    Only Fools Love Fossils
    Only Fools Love Fossils Only fools love fossils. These few words are probably an insignificant contribution compared to what great orators and writers might produce, but maybe the sum of all small things can influence bigger challenges. Recently I just thought I was...


    Pascal Derrien
    20/05/2016 #19 Pascal Derrien
    #16 Thank You @Tausif Mundrawala I think so too :-)
    Pascal Derrien
    20/05/2016 #18 Pascal Derrien
    #17 thank you @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    20/05/2016 #17 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Great post @Pascal Derrien, really enjoyed the moral.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    19/05/2016 #16 Tausif Mundrawala
    Where there is a will there is a way and where there is a way here comes the destiny. Excellent post, Pascal.
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #14 Pascal Derrien
    #13 thank you @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman one step at time 😉
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    19/05/2016 #13 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    An excellent read, Pascal and you stated in one of your comments one step in the right direction is better than a step back.
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #12 Pascal Derrien
    #1 many thanks agree it is within reach if there is a will 😉
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #11 Pascal Derrien
    #2 who knows the thing is we gotta change the modus operandi it does obviously not work
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #10 Pascal Derrien
    #3 thanks one step in the right direction is better than a step back 😊
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #9 Pascal Derrien
    #5 hopefully change is in the air but still very much work in progress
    Pascal Derrien
    19/05/2016 #8 Pascal Derrien
    #7 your comment made me realized just that 😊
    Dean Owen
    19/05/2016 #7 Dean Owen
    Tackling the world's problems all in a nice little 3 minute read!
    Michelle Wright
    19/05/2016 #5 Michelle Wright
    I agree with Mohammed, we have to begin thinking globally, and mankind could change. We have to be mature enough npt to get stucked on older believes.
    Ken Boddie
    19/05/2016 #3 Ken Boddie
    So many questions,
    So little time,
    City governance energy plan?
    That sounds sublime!
    Go wind, wave or solar!
    'Cause fossils are a crime. 💀
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    19/05/2016 #2 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Perhaps, there will be more harnessing power and betterment in societies, when nations begin thinking this world as global village, and mankind is treated in terms of humanity rather than color, creed, language or race.
    Jennifer Martin
    19/05/2016 #1 Jennifer Martin
    Great share. I think that we have to mature not with society or technological, science or any other areas advances, we have to grow much more beyond that. I mean, not going step by step beside society but trying to get ahead of "the game".
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