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  1. Producerdebasish majumder
    LANGUAGE, A BOUNTY NATURE REVEALS!
    LANGUAGE, A BOUNTY NATURE REVEALS!Nature’s venture in our planet Earth With numerous signals, having no dearth To convey her message To create and procreate A unique process with grand rhythm She displays her audacity in her own realm! In nature all...
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    🐝 Fatima Williams
    25/03/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Language is nothing but a set of words that can make or break harmony. Another honey-filled poem. Thanks @debasish majumder
    Cyndi wilkins
    25/03/2017 #9 Cyndi wilkins
    Actions speak louder...another knock out of the park @debasish majumder....
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    25/03/2017 #8 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "Language alone can act as a bonding tool with grand harmony!" Most definitely, language is our grandest achievement. And we do need to stay aware enough to use it for harmony.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    25/03/2017 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Very timely, @debasish majumder. We have a choice "Language alone can act as a bonding tool with grand harmony!: vs "Language could be equally bane If we utilize it with disdain To discriminate and humiliate".
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    25/03/2017 #6 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    language to spread bliss yes to that @debasish majumder
  2. Producerdebasish majumder
    ELEGY OF DEATH!
    ELEGY OF DEATH!I am a dead body I have been kept in a mortuary For peoples to pay their homage Life itself has been construed as a maze Which trigger us to roll on with amaze? Afterwards I will be taken to crematorium Where with lot of...
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    Mohammed A. Jawad
    24/03/2017 #19 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Ah, death, the bitter truth of life, how well it tutors its own reality!
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    24/03/2017 #18 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    that is so beautiful @debasish majumder, you keep on spoiling us with your poems, thank you
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    24/03/2017 #17 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Very interesting - a different slant on death/life. Well done, @debasish majumder.
    Gerald Hecht
    24/03/2017 #15 Gerald Hecht
    #14 @Gert 🐝 Scholtz yeah...I think that is what has been done here.
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    24/03/2017 #14 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @debasish majumder I am going to use words so simple compared to yours Debasish: You bring death to life in this extraordinary poem!
    debasish majumder
    24/03/2017 #13 debasish majumder
    #12 decent style to nullify, certainly you are an axiom to emulate @Pascal Derrien!
    Pascal Derrien
    24/03/2017 #12 Pascal Derrien
    Probably not appropriate but i smiled while reading this another good one ☺
    Gerald Hecht
    24/03/2017 #9 Gerald Hecht
    This reminds me of a "poetry of engagement thingie" that I wrote last night --overcome with restlessness upon finding it too hot too sleep:
    --
    Mysterious --yet who can deny it's tangibility?

    There is no yardstick --no altimeter to inform/quantify the distance twixt engagement's eternal meaning ....resonating, quivering subjective sensations
    and...

    ... the sea level atmospheric pressure at some blindfolded choice...
    ...of Cartesian abscissa/ordinate intersection...
    ...what Euclidean plane can explain...
    ...the shrinking distance between the crow's nest of the mast...
    ...and the sea (as she sails away) from one's heart...
    ...or the inverse growth in spatial separation --quite inseparable from her shivering return?
    ---
    --gerry
    Ali Anani
    24/03/2017 #8 Ali Anani
    Lovely essence of flora

    They themselves produce an aura

    This is how perhaps mortals

    Makes life on Earth immortals!

    This is the spirit that I enjoy reading dear @debasish majumder View more
    Lovely essence of flora

    They themselves produce an aura

    This is how perhaps mortals

    Makes life on Earth immortals!

    This is the spirit that I enjoy reading dear @debasish majumder. Thank you Close
    Juan Imaz
    24/03/2017 #7 Juan Imaz
    nice poetry!
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    24/03/2017 #5 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    Love this. Thanks for sharing.
  3. Producerdebasish majumder
    IN COMMEMORATION OF POETS!
    IN COMMEMORATION OF POETS!Poets are of weird faculty They are obsessed to create verses with enlightening audacity Out of their imagination to pave the way for engendering new realm A prodigy, which is a rare asset, paving us to emerge the only creature in...
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    Laurent Boscherini
    23/03/2017 #14 Anonymous
    #11 beautifuly stanced @Donna-Luisa Eversley ;)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    23/03/2017 #13 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Poetry is eternal and divine 🤗 Once again beautiful poem @debasish majumder
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    23/03/2017 #11 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    Poets are people.
    You and me.
    Our stories in verse.
    which may not rhyme sometimes
    But stories we retell
    all the time.

    ***Thanks for your commemoration of poets @debasish majumder
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    22/03/2017 #9 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    This is very beautiful and a tribute to all poets worldwide that ever lived, loved and will live, and love. Beautiful @debasish majumder
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    22/03/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is a beautiful tribute to poets. Yes, "Poetry is eternal" and "They hone their skill to express their legitimate rule". Perfection, @debasish majumder.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    21/03/2017 #7 Tausif Mundrawala
    This is perfectly meant for all us poets. A poet knew no boundaries and can explore unexplored territories. You have covered all the parameters required to become a poet and none of the attributes were left. What an excellent way to celebrate the art of poetry and a praising piece for all the poets.

    Excellently penned. My words seem ineffable to describe the standard of this poem. Thanks for sharing my friend, @debasish majumder
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    21/03/2017 #6 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @debasish majumder A commemoration of poets most poetic. Superb writing Debasish!
  4. ProducerHervé Sabattier
    World Poetry Day - Journée Mondiale de la Poésie
    World Poetry Day - Journée Mondiale de la PoésieToday, 21st of March is World Poetry Day. It was declared as such by the UNESCO in 1999, to promote reading, writing, publishing and teaching of poetry throughout the world. In order to celebrate this day, here is an homage, in five...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    21/03/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is a lovely tribute to all poets everywhere @Hervé Sabattier.
    debasish majumder
    21/03/2017 #7 debasish majumder
    what a grand tributes to the poets @Harve Sabattier! enjoyed read with heart's content. thank you very much for the share.
    Hervé Sabattier
    21/03/2017 #5 Hervé Sabattier
    #3 Thank you Gert. Double thank you, by the way, for it's you who gave me the idea of a collection of poets/poems, further to your recent post on the beepoets....
    Thank you again and have a nice day...
    Hervé Sabattier
    21/03/2017 #4 Hervé Sabattier
    #2 Oui Pascal, du beau monde... Et quelle belle musique ! Vous l'entendez ?
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    21/03/2017 #3 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @Hervé Sabattier Thank you for this Herve. I find it fitting that one of my favorite poets publishes poems about world poetry day!
    Pascal Derrien
    21/03/2017 #2 Pascal Derrien
    du beau monde @Hervé Sabattier :-)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    21/03/2017 #1 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Nice List of poem's here @Hervé Sabattier Happy World Poetry day.On beBee everyday is world poetry day because of awesome poets like @Gert 🐝 Scholtz @debasish majumder @Pascal Derrien @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. Ken and Kevin and many many more awesome bees ❤
  5. ProducerMiriam Barnaby

    Miriam Barnaby

    20/03/2017
    VANAM
    VANAMThis was my second attempt in poem writing :-) You might have a spare minute to read it :-)  Thanks and have a great Monday, wherever you are and whatever you`re doing... :-) Lisa 🐝 Gallagher,Devesh Bhatt, Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman Paul Walters 🐝...
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    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    21/03/2017 #9 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #8 Perfect photo!
    Miriam Barnaby
    21/03/2017 #8 Miriam Barnaby
    #7 Thank you very much @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher , happy you like my poem and the art work of a to me unknown author. I thought is was just the right picture to complement the poem. Best wishes :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    21/03/2017 #7 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Lovely poem @Miriam Barnaby! Did you do the artwork too? You have a talent for writing poetry, very seductive :)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #6 Miriam Barnaby
    #1 @Tausif Mundrawala :-) I very much appreciate you inspiring comment, thank you :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #5 Miriam Barnaby
    #2 Happy you like it @🐝 Fatima Williams, thank you :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #4 Miriam Barnaby
    Thank you very much for stopping, @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman#3
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    20/03/2017 #3 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Lovely piece and beautifully crafted.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    20/03/2017 #1 Tausif Mundrawala
    My soul is falling into the darkness of your eyes. This was written excellently. Your poems are a depiction of the art where an enthusiast keeps flocking to the art gallery. Thanks for sharing and tagging me, @Miriam Barnaby
  6. ProducerDevesh Bhatt

    Devesh Bhatt

    16/03/2017
    A LOVE SONG - by Devesh Bhatt
    A LOVE SONG - by Devesh BhattBeauty is a breath of fresh air,Which smells of love that you and i share,For the mountain breeze that waves your hair,As the night makes dreams of each nightmare.Beauty is what the mighty river sings,A soulful tune that only love brings,Till our...
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    🐝 Fatima Williams
    17/03/2017 #4 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Beautiful poem 🤗
    Diwakar Diwi
    17/03/2017 #3 Diwakar Diwi
    brilliant lines.
    Devesh Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #2 Devesh Bhatt
    #1 its actually Nainital, my birthplace. And thanks a lot.
    Pascal Derrien
    16/03/2017 #1 Pascal Derrien
    for a second I thought it was Dublin bay in the visual :-) thanks for the shout out and that's a beauty of writing piece it is really the first paragraph :-)
  7. ProducerDevesh Bhatt

    Devesh Bhatt

    15/03/2017
    I MUST FLOW -by Devesh Bhatt
    I MUST FLOW -by Devesh BhattIn the depths of my knowing,I see my true self flowing.Where the knowing keeps on growing,And the growing  nurtures knowing,Confusions are no more annoying,But a thoughtful way of going.So i flow,with the currents of senses,Armed with logical...
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    Devesh Bhatt
    20/03/2017 #26 Devesh Bhatt
    #25
    I am aware that i must embrace
    The glowing light and the shady space
    Consciously move through unconscious ways.
    Observing how revelation plays
    A forced attempt to rhyme what thoughful Melissa Says :)
    Melissa Hefferman
    20/03/2017 #25 Anonymous
    #19 I suppose what I meant by that statement is that I've become aware that 90% of my unconscious mind rules the 10% that thinks it's thinking, and therefore my Life. And that 90% comes form everything I've ever read, seen, experienced, etc... and so it is with each of us for the most, but not all because biology can differ, part. It is therefore good to excavate all the strange things up in that shady space, and embrace change. But then again, that's just my purpose as contemplated in my own current flow, the dynamics of differing keys may strike an entirely new chord! :-)
    Devesh Bhatt
    19/03/2017 #24 Devesh Bhatt
    #23 yes, in the depths, mostly :)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/03/2017 #23 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #22 It must be stuck deep down inside this gnarly brain somewhere LOL.
    Devesh Bhatt
    19/03/2017 #22 Devesh Bhatt
    #21 You already do :)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/03/2017 #21 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    "For the purpose of the journey, I know I must flow." Me too!
    Devesh Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #20 Devesh Bhatt
    #17 which one..please share again. Maybe i focused on one line to forget the whole message. Maybe i see it completely now.
    Devesh Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #19 Devesh Bhatt
    #18 no you didnt. If that is the case by your scale, the majority are copying it from here and there

    I also remember, we understand things as we please, doesnt that yield originality?
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #18 Anonymous
    Maybe I stole it! Apparently I steal 90% of everything from something else, and at most times I don't even know it! Mindfields.ha
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    17/03/2017 #17 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    @Devesh Bhatt I remember which one! hahahaha #16
    Devesh Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #16 Devesh Bhatt
    #15 i will also share the feeling with thw pebbles on the street, something i enjoyed in a poem by someone else, i cant seem to remember which one.Maybe @Donna-Luisa Eversley but i dont recall which one . It wasnt about the pebble but that line really hit me.

    Have an awesome creative, enjoyable and a memorable time .

    Thanks a lot for the rhyme.

    Feels like those poetry sessions or qawaali, perhaps the freestyle hiphop duels , only that the meaning keeps expanding not punched down.
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #15 Anonymous
    #14 So carry on and share that feeling with every Soul you meet today, and with every step you take. Even pebbles can create Waves. On shores they break, and perhaps one day we shall all embrace the land Awake! :)
    Devesh Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #14 Devesh Bhatt
    #13 whatever the state of mind, it is the evergrowing kind, it may give a vision, it may turn me blind.
    But it rather be organic, than the one assigned, cause i will know where i came from, and where i am at, perhaps enjoy the feeling
    I am not a labrat. Even if i were
    I would fail to concur :)


    Your comment has made my morning and my day worth the wake :)
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #13 Anonymous
    Flow is a state of mind, of the most sublime kind. Harness it for business, say some current languages, pyschology of psyche, for cortex higher productivity and profitability. Be here Now sing Spiritual masters, lets overcome Humanities disasters. The poet though, the musicians and the Artists, they've always set Sails in flow; there's no Sale needed to grow.

    And, I Love this. I flowed a response, because I felt like it! Terrific Thursday wishes to YOU! Flow on!
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    16/03/2017 #12 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    #11 Thank you @Devesh Bhatt. I have found that if I view everyone as a teacher, I will learn far more.
    Devesh Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #11 Devesh Bhatt
    #10 this one is emerging as something special. Thanks a lot.
    It is an inspired piece.
    Maybe i work out something as good as yours with my uniqueness someday.
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    16/03/2017 #10 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    Pretty profound, @Devesh Bhatt
    Devesh Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #9 Devesh Bhatt
    #6 thank you
    Devesh Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #8 Devesh Bhatt
    #7 having flow is amazing. But the absence of it isnt bad. Thanks
    Laura Donnelly
    16/03/2017 #7 Laura Donnelly
    @@Devesh Bhatt flow is the important part of life - how to get out of our own way! Nice work.
  8. Producerdebasish majumder
    TIME AND SPACE, AN INTRIGUING EPISODE!
    TIME AND SPACE, AN INTRIGUING EPISODE!I may be eulogized I may be condemned Though I am a product of time and space Which enable me to construe my own realm? Which is a sheer disgrace? Instilling ego and vanity on me Making me disintegrated from the majority...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    24/03/2017 #19 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Superb writing, @debasish majumder. "Humanity is not an individual’s concern". I find this line timely because as individuals we should be concerned about humanity but together we can do so much more.
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    17/03/2017 #18 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Pensive reflections. ..time to ponder, examine self and surroundings for bettering lives!
    Qamar Ali Khan
    17/03/2017 #17 Qamar Ali Khan
    Beautiful work @debasish majumder as ever! Wonderful articulation of words and thoughts! Thanks for sharing!
    debasish majumder
    17/03/2017 #16 debasish majumder
    #15 thank you very much madam @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. for your consistent support and appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    17/03/2017 #15 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    that is a beautiful message @debasish majumder, thanks for your creation!
    debasish majumder
    17/03/2017 #14 debasish majumder
    #13 thank you sir @Ali Anani for sharing your valued comment. i guess, external and internal, both are continuously complementing each other and always in a process of changing the qualitative and quantitative values of both, resulting in sometimes as weird manifestation to us. however, we are naturally being endowed to adapt with the available system,. consequently an organization too evolve and to ensure its sustainability it is necessary to adapt as well innovate a strategy compatible for its existence.
    Ali Anani
    17/03/2017 #13 Ali Anani
    I am just a product of time and space

    What an irony I fanned with my self-praise

    Where actually external conditions are primarily responsible

    For my perpetual extinction with disgrace, a subject of utter despicable!

    Nice and flowing thoughts dear @debasish majumder. However; I find myself asking all self-organizing systems do that from within and without asking for permission to self-organize. They adapt to the environment and exchange energy with it but then self-organize. Are we only responding to the external conditions, or go a step further to self-organize? I feel this topic is worthy of further study.
    Fran 🐝 Brizzolis
    17/03/2017 #12 Fran 🐝 Brizzolis
    Interesting reflection ... But as Calderon de la Barca said in his famous work "life is dream":

    The king dreams that he is king, and he lives
    With this deceit commanding,
    Disposing and governing;
    And this applause, which receives
    Borrowed, in the wind writes,
    And in ashes it converts
    Death, misery!
    That there are those who try to reign,
    Seeing that he has to wake up
    In the dream of death?

    The rich man dreams of his wealth,
    What more care he offers;
    The poor man who suffers
    Their misery and their poverty;
    The one who begins to thrive dreams,
    Dreams the one who tries and pretends,
    The one who hurts and offends dreams,
    And in the world, in conclusion,
    All dream what they are,
    Although no one understands it.

    I dream that I am here
    Of these prisons loaded,
    And I dreamed that in another state
    More flattering I saw myself.
    What is life? A frenzy.
    What is life? An illusion,
    A shadow, a fiction,
    And the greatest good is small:
    That all life is dream,
    And dreams, dreams are.
    Juan Imaz
    17/03/2017 #11 Juan Imaz
    nice!
    Deb🐝 Lange
    17/03/2017 #10 Deb🐝 Lange
    Collectively we thrive ! Thanks for sharing !
  9. Producerdebasish majumder
    TIME AND KNOWLEDGE, A UNIQUE CRESCENDO!
    TIME AND KNOWLEDGE, A UNIQUE CRESCENDO!We have various clocks Some are mechanical Some are electronic Some are atomic Tick tock, all moves with vogue As per available epoch Some may have human design To gauge time to align Who will fathom time? To...
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    Maria Teresa Redondo Infantes
    15/03/2017 #28 Maria Teresa Redondo Infantes
    #26 Tank you to much
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    15/03/2017 #27 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Where knowledge thus enriched by your poem with dedicated fervor! This one goes out to you @debasish majumder Keep buzzing. 🤗🐝🤗
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #26 debasish majumder
    #23 thank you very much @Cory Galbraith for your appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Lada 🏡 Prkic
    15/03/2017 #25 Lada 🏡 Prkic
    I can only say that your poetic language is unique. In your poems, I always find new words that help me expand my vocabulary.
    Emilia M. Ludovino
    15/03/2017 #24 Emilia M. Ludovino
    Thank you for another great poem dear @debasish majumder!. "We cannot rule out, we are mere a product of time and space"- Thought-provoking sentence - are we a mere product of time and space!? or instead, time and space are a mere product of our unity consciousness!? Quantic thoughts flowing through my mind at this moment. :) Where once was the inner and the outer, the real and the unreal, the Self and the non-Self, the absolute and the relative, the eternal and the temporal — there is now only One.
    Cory Galbraith
    15/03/2017 #23 Cory Galbraith
    Debashish, clearly you have a talent for this kind of writing - raw, emotional and impactful. Certainly unique on social media. Keep them coming!
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #19 debasish majumder
    #17 thanks a lot @Pascal Derrien for your continuous support and appreciation, triggering me to write more. i am privileged and honored.
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #18 debasish majumder
    #16 thank you very much madam @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher for your cordial appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Pascal Derrien
    15/03/2017 #17 Pascal Derrien
    Happy i have dedicated some time to read this one .....precious it is @debasish majumder
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    15/03/2017 #16 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Great way to weave different aspects of time and how it can affect us personally and globally @debasish majumder. Sharing!
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #15 debasish majumder
    #14 thank you very much @David B. Grinberg for your warm support and appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    David B. Grinberg
    15/03/2017 #14 David B. Grinberg
    Thanks for another enlightening and thought-provoking poem, Debasish. I'm sharing on three hives. I'd get into a discussion of "time" here but it would take too long. Keep buzzing!
    Brian McKenzie
    15/03/2017 #13 Brian McKenzie
    "Having an inherent inertia to arrest us within its ambit to camouflage
    Clouded us with a view" This best sums up our hurry up and do everything world where accomplish so very little of matter.
    debasish majumder
    14/03/2017 #12 debasish majumder
    #11 thank you very much @Gert 🐝 Scholtz for your continuous support and cordial appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    14/03/2017 #11 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @debasish majumder If I can choose a speck of time in your poem it would be this: "Our ultimate existing contour and rhyme - it has been set as biological clock, within us the only prime! A masterful poem Debasish!
    debasish majumder
    14/03/2017 #10 debasish majumder
    #9 thank you very much sir @Ali Anani for your continuous support and appreciation and sharing your valued comment. i am privileged and honored.
    Ali Anani
    14/03/2017 #9 Ali Anani
    This is a lovely poem dear @debasish majumder. It has many delightful lines. I choose these two lines to comment on:

    We address time out of our observation
    Ponder it with intense introspection

    You remind me of the The Observer Effect. When we observe something we may modify an aspect of its behavior, in response to their knowing that it is being studied. I wonder if time is subject to this effect! If yes, then time has a new definition. As dear @Sara Jacobovici is heavily interested on time and its meaning may be she has something to say.

    An intriguing poem this is indeed. Sharing.
  10. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Things a Newborn Should Know
    Things a Newborn Should KnowYou know life’s not in a box tied with a bow not a one size fit all not just ticking a box not a wanderlust ramble or a preamble to gamble life’s an unfolding puzzle each piece is a chapter each moment is a capture each second filled with...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #1 I am glad you enjoyed it, Devesh.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #6 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #3 #2 Thank you, Lisa and Fatima. I appreciate your comments.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #5 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #4 You are welcome, Rod.
    Rod Loader
    14/03/2017 #4 Rod Loader
    Thanks for sharing your wonderful words @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    14/03/2017 #2 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Lovely poem @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman 🤗👌🐝
    Devesh Bhatt
    14/03/2017 #1 Devesh Bhatt
    I am almost speechless and thought-full. Lovely poem.
  11. ProducerMiriam Barnaby

    Miriam Barnaby

    11/03/2017
    YOU
    YOUMy latest poem for you, not necessarily about you :-) Devesh Bhatt, Melissa Hefferman,Joyce Bowen,kader abdesslam,Charlie Accetta,Jared Wiese, 🐝 adding VALUE & RESULTS,Chichi Okoye,@Yogesh Sukal,Paul Walters,Tausif Mundrawala,🐝 Fatima...
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    Miriam Barnaby
    13/03/2017 #24 Miriam Barnaby
    Thank you very much, @Tausif Mundrawala, for reading my poem and your comment :-) #23
    Tausif Mundrawala
    13/03/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    Excellently penned. Especially the line, but real you, is hiding in the sea. Absolutely. We tend to forget our inner selves bu not realizing that it needs to be nurtured more than anything else. Thanks for sharing it with us, @Miriam Barnaby
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #22 Miriam Barnaby
    #21 thank you Melissa :-)
    Melissa Hefferman
    12/03/2017 #21 Anonymous
    Wonderful! You is an uncovering and unfolding, so fluidly emerging with your poetic voice. 💖
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #20 Miriam Barnaby
    #17 biscuits and tea on its way :-) Thank you Paul.... Still laughing at the thought of you and your bike being busy all day :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #19 Miriam Barnaby
    #18 thanks for your time Lisa :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    12/03/2017 #18 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Very nice @Miriam Barnaby, thanks for the tag!
    Paul Walters
    12/03/2017 #17 Paul Walters
    @aah a poem for Sunday Thank you ms Barnaby !!!
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #16 Yogesh Sukal
    Agree with you @Miriam Barnaby
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #15 Miriam Barnaby
    #14 Dear Yogesh, as someone once said, I don't write my poems, they come to me. So, I am afraid, we just have to wait and hope that it will be worth our waiting... :-)
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #14 Yogesh Sukal
    #13 You are welcome @Miriam Barnaby, your poems are amazing, we want more, thats an entreaty.
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #13 Miriam Barnaby
    #12 Yogesh, your comment touched me, happy to have a positive influence on someone's feelings. Thank you.
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #12 Yogesh Sukal
    Your each poetry has deep and meaningful beauty.
    To poet Miriam, continue such poetry is my entreaty.


    Inspired from.
    https://www.bebee.com/content/1279991/1157398
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #11 Miriam Barnaby
    #10 yes Fatima, let's learn to love ourselves first :-) Thank you for your time :-)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    11/03/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima Williams
    @Miriam Barnaby This is lovely. I love the poem. You are who you are ! Embrace that and life will be beautiful :)
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #9 Miriam Barnaby
    #1 and i love your comments Kader, thanx :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #8 Miriam Barnaby
    #2 thank you very much.... Thanx
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #7 Miriam Barnaby
    #3 i am sure others like you too :-) thank you for your comment
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #6 Miriam Barnaby
    #5 Franci, hello :-) thanx a lot , very much appreciated :-)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    11/03/2017 #5 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Amen and Bravo! This sends a wake-up call and a powerful message.
  12. ProducerTausif Mundrawala
    Tending Flowers
    Tending FlowersDonned in kirtle,tending flowers with her hands as gentle.array of blossoms arranged exquisitely,making plucked ones aware about their beauty.with their mesmerizing serenity and innocence,has won many hearts with sheer brilliance.its fragility holds...
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    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #30 Tausif Mundrawala
    #29 I think we should discuss it in detail but this column won't suffice.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #29 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #28 Yes, I just pulled up a site on fen shui and vaastu shastra - very interesting.
    http://www.vaastushaastra.com/vastuforhouse.html View more
    #28 Yes, I just pulled up a site on fen shui and vaastu shastra - very interesting.
    http://www.vaastushaastra.com/vastuforhouse.html
    Here is the link to the Lladro site
    http://www.lladro.com/home.jhtml Close
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #28 Tausif Mundrawala
    #26 I believe they have healing power too. They are considered auspicious according to fen shui and vaastu shastra. Well this topic itself is very interesting.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #26 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #25 Yes, crystal is pretty and I love it when the sunlight shines through creating beautiful prisms but Lladro has a such a softness to it and quite different from other elegant pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #25 Tausif Mundrawala
    #24 Am sorry for the loss. But crystals are great too.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #24 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #23 Unfortunately I don't. After my husband passed away, I moved several times so rather than risk having the pieces break and chip, I gave them to a dear friend. I also use to collect crystal, which I still have a few pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    #22 I hope its there with you now. I would like to see the pics, if you don't mind.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #22 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Beautiful and artistically crafted words. I used to collect Lladro. They are lovely and delicate pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #20 Tausif Mundrawala
    #19 How wonderful it might be for you to judge all the antiques and exhibiting it. I would say, Wow! I got myself enrolled in one of the MOOC's based on this subject. My interest died down due to some reasons but after meeting you I would definitely complete this course as soon as possible.

    Stay blessed. I wish you luck for your future endeavors.
    Aleta Curry
    10/03/2017 #19 Aleta Curry
    #15 Terrific, thanks! I will message you my email; not sure if it appears anywhere on our profiles. Anyway, I realise now I should have messaged you privately in the first place, not blurted in out in public, sorry! I just got so excited!

    As to recognising it, well, I am an accredited Fine Art and Antiques valuer, after all. It would be a bit pathetic if I couldn't pick out classic Lladró!

    I didn't know it was *that* popular. We really do learn something new every day!
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #18 Tausif Mundrawala
    #17 Thank you so much for an instant reply and acknowledging the essence of this poem.
    Ivette K. Caballero
    10/03/2017 #17 Ivette K. Caballero
    @Tausif Mundrawala Very deep and exquisite thoughts! Thank you for sharing.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #15 Tausif Mundrawala
    #14 I am exhilarated to have found someone who recognized that this figurine is of Lladró. I have been a fan of this brand since my childhood as I have been observing it in advertisement columns in one of our newspapers. Celebrities were been presented and were felicitated with these figurines meant for couples.

    They have even started catering to the needs of Indians in the form of their favorite dieties statues.

    Permission granted. Do you want me to mail this poem to your email.
    Aleta Curry
    10/03/2017 #14 Aleta Curry
    I've always loved Lladró, and the detail in this beauty, 'Flowers of the Season', is exquisite. You've captured her essence perfectly in verse, @Tausif Mundrawala. If I have some time, I'd like to have your poem reprinted on a poster and displayed at the Sydney Antiques Fair. May I have your permission to do so?
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #13 Tausif Mundrawala
    #12 Thank you so much, Sir. Your feedback is a topping on a cake.
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    10/03/2017 #12 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    In the paraphrased classic line of "Jerry McGuire" - "You had me at Kirtle".
    Tausif Mundrawala
    09/03/2017 #11 Tausif Mundrawala
    I would like to thank you, @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen for reading this poem and finding it relevant. You are an exceptional writer to an extent that irrespective of length your buzzes have made me totally immersed in those written words. Appreciated.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    09/03/2017 #10 Tausif Mundrawala
    #8 This figurine needed this poem and I penned by observing it very closely. My hard work paid off. Thanks, @🐝 Fatima Williams
  13. Producerdebasish majumder
    MEN, WOMEN ARE EQUAL IN NATURE'S DESTINY!
    MEN, WOMEN ARE EQUAL IN NATURE'S DESTINY!Hydrogen and Oxygen, two opposite character What an amazing reactor Combined to form water, essential for life A lovely nomenclature, perhaps in Earth only it survive Male and female, equally opposite in construction Nature...
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    Pamela 🐝 Williams
    11/03/2017 #27 Pamela 🐝 Williams
    How true this is @debasish majumder;
    "Where women are subjugated by men out of his strengthen stature
    But we tend to forget a basic rule
    Exerting force can alone express a sheer misrule
    If we subjugate and humiliate women
    We may only beckon our own jeopardy, the only omen
    Which only eclipse our own civilization?
    Progresses will regress
    Hinder all ingress
    Our planet will face immense mess"

    When will humanity learn that you can't subjugate another without decreasing your own value to humanity.
    Savvy Raj
    10/03/2017 #26 Savvy Raj
    Wonderful reflections @debasish majumder Enjoyed reading your verses in the depth of your sensing humanity in the integration . And yes, the last stanza stood out for me where you strongly suggest the need to thrive together as a humanity!
    Laura Mikolaitis
    09/03/2017 #25 Laura Mikolaitis
    "To exist with symphony"...such a beautiful thought @debasish majumder. As your words unfold they become even more powerful and evocative. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    09/03/2017 #20 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Another masterpiece @debasish majumder and I love @Randy Keho's coment!
    Deb🐝 Lange
    09/03/2017 #19 Deb🐝 Lange
    "We must preserve the beauty of such unique duality Life on Earth will express its presence with joviality! It is true
    Life and death both comprised in unique hue Male and female are unique gift of nature"
    Beautiful - many years ago I did not want to call myself a feminist - as I believed that the focus needed to be respect for both men and women. - However, I recognise there has been a very big imbalance and the suppression of women over centuries, so I respect all the women and men before me who have stood strong for respect for both men and women. In my lifetime I have endured much trauma that was inflicted by men, and I understand that it has been individuals who have not had the conscious awareness to choose respect. I am very discerning who I spend my time with now. I am also proud that my 2 sons are 2 "gentle" men. I enjoy the company of gentlemen and gentlewomen online here in beBee. The new era of respect for men and women and what we both bring to the world is here in many places. And there is much work to do in many others.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    09/03/2017 #18 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Beautifully written and "To exist with symphony!', sends a powerful message, @debasish majumder.
    Melissa Hefferman
    09/03/2017 #17 Anonymous
    Humanism, yes!!!! Oh oh oh, I just Love this. Music to my Now happy ears! You have a sword pen, keep wielding it in beauty, we're blessed that you share. :)
    Randy Keho
    08/03/2017 #16 Randy Keho
    You put the human in humanity @debasish majumder. But, beware, the greeting card companies have got their eye on you.
    Aaron Skogen
    08/03/2017 #15 Aaron Skogen
    Well said @debasish majumder!
    Ali Anani
    08/03/2017 #14 Ali Anani
    Thanks dear @debasish majumder for your interesting poem. The preceding comments reflected my opinion. I want to highlight two lines from your poem These
    are:
    Production and reproduction process rolls on
    By following an inevitable design nature drawn

    You know very well how passionate I am to this idea. Nature believes in couling- such as a woman and a man. Therefore, I prefer coupled days- not one sex only.
    Javier 🐝 beBee
    08/03/2017 #13 Javier 🐝 beBee
    No men’s day, no women’s day... that would mean that the world works much better :)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    08/03/2017 #12 🐝 Fatima Williams
    @debasish majumder Well said !

    No men’s day, no women’s day
    Why can’t we crave humanity to thrive with gay?

    We should celebrate every moment of our life. At this moment everyone on beBee celebrates your awesome buzz that points out the importance of equality and the need to appreciate the people around us at any given moment.

    I celebrate this moment where we reinforce the importance of celebrating and valuing the people in our lives every single day.
    Thank you and Happy debasish day. Keep buzzing #beBeesforever
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    08/03/2017 #11 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    beautiful art @debasish majumder, thank you for your gift that you share with all of us.
    Renée  🐝 Cormier
    08/03/2017 #9 Renée 🐝 Cormier
    Thanks for tagging me. I agree. We shouldn't even need to have women's day or any specially marked day. All beings should be celebrated for their uniqueness and miraculous nature each and every day.
  14. Producerdebasish majumder
    MYSTERY OF CLOUD!
    MYSTERY OF CLOUD!Cloud, dark and deep And having emphatic clout Makes huge noise in loud Chill not only the environ But, also our spine with electrical ion Abruptly it appears in our spectrum Shiver us with its mystic presence in anon...
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    debasish majumder
    06/03/2017 #32 debasish majumder
    #31 thank you very much madam @Emilia M. Ludovino for sharing your appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Emilia M. Ludovino
    06/03/2017 #31 Emilia M. Ludovino
    Thank you, dear @debasish majumder for tagging me in such a beautiful poem. Wonderful way to start my week. I especially loved this excerpt - an ode to the preciousness of rain and how life cannot exist without rainy clouds. After the storm comes the SUN. Pure joy. Have a blessed day my friend!

    "Cloud brings shower

    To human as well nature, a unique bower

    To make us pristine

    Its presence is truly divine

    Plants grow, human glow

    Rivers and Rivulets strengthen its flow

    Lives in planet enriches

    Metals, minerals and all become accessible and precious

    By getting impetus to its thrust

    Truly, cloud, you emerge as a boon

    By virtue of you all creatures rejuvenate and dance with jovial tune!"
    debasish majumder
    06/03/2017 #30 debasish majumder
    #29 thank you very much @🐝 Fatima Williams for your continuous support and appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    06/03/2017 #29 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Love the poem @debasish majumder You paint white, black, grey and rainbow colors with your poetry. Thank you
    Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    05/03/2017 #28 Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    Your very welcome @debasish majumder in beBee in English, Social Media, Writers , Keep up the great buzzes here!!
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #27 debasish majumder
    #23 thank you very much @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. for your appreciation.
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #26 debasish majumder
    #24 thanks a lot @Melissa Hefferman for your appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #25 debasish majumder
    #22 thank you very much @Deb🐝 Lange for your warm appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Melissa Hefferman
    05/03/2017 #24 Anonymous
    What a delicious poem. It consumed me! Beautiful contrasts and writing. :)
    Deb🐝 Lange
    05/03/2017 #22 Deb🐝 Lange
    Dear @debasish majumder I love the way you express what you feel with your poetry
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #21 debasish majumder
    #20 thank you very much for sharing your valued comment @Brian McKenzie. i am privileged and honored.
    Brian McKenzie
    05/03/2017 #20 Brian McKenzie
    Pondering shat gravity and grey, may dump on me today. Great read @debasish majumder
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #19 debasish majumder
    thank you very much @Brian McKenzie for being kind enough to go through my post and sharing it. i am privileged and honored.
    debasish majumder
    05/03/2017 #18 debasish majumder
    #15 the beauty of gift is lying with the sharing it with others, where gift becomes a true imperative and it cannot be a possession of any individual @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher. i am privileged to be associated with plenty of phenomenal luminaries who always help to enrich me in beBee platform. i am indebted to all my affable bees who are contributing their valuable inspirations to enable me to write poetry. thank you very much madam.
    Devesh Bhatt
    05/03/2017 #16 Devesh Bhatt
    An ode to the monsoon clouds which are most laden when they reach you?

    Great buzz
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    05/03/2017 #15 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    I love how you draw similarities between the universe and human experience @debasish majumder. When I read, I feel the emotions and I can visualize colors too. You have a gift! Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us.
    debasish majumder
    04/03/2017 #14 debasish majumder
    #13 thank you very much madam @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman for your continuous support and cordial appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    04/03/2017 #13 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    I truly enjoy your poetry, @debasish majumder. Your words make sense out of the rawness of realism and yet you present your thoughts eloquently.
  15. ProducerMiriam Barnaby

    Miriam Barnaby

    03/03/2017
    `MM`
    `MM`My fingerscautiously feelingthe fabric of yourlower lip. My curious moutheagerly joins them,tasting their shiver. Inhalingyour held back exhalefilled with pleasure drops,spirit wateringhelping it to grow. The locks of my hairform a privacyfor...
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    Paul Walters
    10/03/2017 #12 Paul Walters
    @Miriam Barnaby fabulous as always !
    Miriam Barnaby
    04/03/2017 #11 Miriam Barnaby
    @Franci Eugenia Hofmann#10 thank you, very much appreciated. All the best:-)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    03/03/2017 #10 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Beautiful poetry, @Miriam Barnaby. Welcome to beBee.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    03/03/2017 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #4 Thank you, for your kind mention, Devesh.
    Miriam Barnaby
    03/03/2017 #8 Miriam Barnaby
    #6 hi@Fatima Williams , what a warm welcome , thank you very much, it means a lot to me. Best wishes :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    03/03/2017 #7 Miriam Barnaby
    #5 @Tausif Mundrawala , thank you very much for your welcome :-) Cannot wait to be inspired by you and others ... Hope I won't disappoint you .... :-)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    03/03/2017 #6 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Thank you @Devesh Bhatt Your poems are as awesome as yourself.

    Hi @Miriam Barnaby Welcome to beBeeland 🤗🐝🤗
    Great to have you here. And a very intense and lovely poem 👌👌👌
    Tausif Mundrawala
    03/03/2017 #5 Tausif Mundrawala
    I would like to thank Devesh for bringing to my notice such a talent. A wonderful poem to start a journey here on beBee. Welcome to this wonderful world of bees.
    Devesh Bhatt
    03/03/2017 #4 Devesh Bhatt
    There are many here with great poems @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman @Hervé Sabattier @Donna-Luisa Eversley to name a few out of spontaneity. And yes lovely ones by @🐝 Fatima Williams @Savvy Raj. I could go on and on. I would always fall short of names of the good stuff here.
    Devesh Bhatt
    03/03/2017 #3 Devesh Bhatt
    #2 i was a reader of your poems for a long time but i never intereacted. Its just that the last poem i read i felt, yes i must interact now. I remember the poems but i forget the names :(
    Miriam Barnaby
    03/03/2017 #2 Miriam Barnaby
    Devesh, I am very surprised you have been `following` me right from my beginning :-) Thank you ! :-) This is my first time ever poem :-) apart from a few while at Uni.... Thank you again :-)
    Devesh Bhatt
    03/03/2017 #1 Devesh Bhatt
    This was the first of your poems that i read on Linekdin as a post.

    It is the first one here. Too. Welcome again
  16. Producerdebasish majumder
    'I', AN OBSCURE ELEMENT IN OUR EYE!
    'I', AN OBSCURE ELEMENT IN OUR EYE!I am in quandary, who I am ? What is in my D.N.A. is truly the reflection in my name? I am confused what is in my plasma How I feel exasperated in the available miasma Where I feel stifled and in claustrophobia Where my entity is...
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    Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    04/03/2017 #33 Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    I love poems like this from a great Bee. Hive #3
    Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    04/03/2017 #32 Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    I love poems like this from a great Bee.
    Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    04/03/2017 #31 Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    I agree with David here & will talk to the Queen: " I think that you and @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. should be knighted as beBee's resident poets" #18
    debasish majumder
    04/03/2017 #30 debasish majumder
    #29 i am privileged and honored for always showering your admiration to me @Ben Pinto! thank you very much for your kind comment.
    Ben Pinto
    04/03/2017 #29 Ben Pinto
    Revisting your brilliant poetic writing style. I will always remember your nice words comparing my eccentric style to O. Henry. Thank you for always piuring your heart into your work for our enjoyment!!! #4
    debasish majumder
    03/03/2017 #28 debasish majumder
    #26 i am honored to be ingratiated with a scientist of high stature like you sir @Ali Anani, who actually played the key role, promoting the impetus to write poems and virtually for your inspiration, i myself is amazed that i can write poems. thank you very much sir for your valued comment and continuous support. i am privileged and honored.
    Ali Anani
    03/03/2017 #26 Ali Anani
    Life itself appears as a conundrum

    Where external elementary conditions make huge humdrum

    The silver lining in the cloud engulfed me

    At least I find a quality and character to align with glee!

    I see my buzz on the mirror of your poem dear @debasish majumder. Your vocabulary is very rich and your poem flows. I selected the few lines that moved me the most. I shared and I voice my opinion again you are a scientific poet.
    debasish majumder
    03/03/2017 #25 debasish majumder
    #23 i am extremely elated and honored @Sara Jacobovici for your inspiring comment. thank you very much madam for sharing the post.
    Sara Jacobovici
    03/03/2017 #24 Sara Jacobovici
    @debasish majumder writes, "Where my entity is in continuous transformation". A must read.
    Sara Jacobovici
    03/03/2017 #23 Sara Jacobovici
    Thanks for the tag @debasish majumder. This was not something I would have wanted to miss. Bravo!! Your poem literally "moved" me in an exploration of identity, physically, from the smallest particles, psychologically and spiritually.
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    03/03/2017 #22 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    @debasish majumder, you capture so many real feelings and elements about life in your poetry, thank you!!
    Devesh Bhatt
    03/03/2017 #21 Devesh Bhatt
    Amazing.

    I am an experience of self discovery :)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    03/03/2017 #20 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Another brilliant poem, @debasish majumder. Thank you for the heads up. The last verse says a lot about real life and what we face today.
    debasish majumder
    02/03/2017 #19 debasish majumder
    #18 thank you very much @David B. Grinberg for your warm commendation, triggering me to write more. i am privileged and honored.
    David B. Grinberg
    02/03/2017 #18 David B. Grinberg
    Debasish, I admire your creative writing talent and potent poetry. I think that you and @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. should be knighted as beBee's resident poets. You both work wonders with words and meaning.
    debasish majumder
    02/03/2017 #15 debasish majumder
    #14 thank you very much @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. for your warm appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    02/03/2017 #14 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    thank you for the tag @debasish majumder, one thing is sure, with your DNA we can expect many more perls of wisdom from you!
  17. ProducerCyndi wilkins

    Cyndi wilkins

    27/02/2017
    Funeral For A Friend
    Funeral For A FriendFor Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc....In loving memory of your wonderful friend...Special thanks to 🐝 Fatima Williams...For tagging me on Liesbeth's beautiful tribute in her honor..."The End Note. In The Book Of Life"THE DASH: By...
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    Cyndi wilkins
    28/02/2017 #10 Cyndi wilkins
    #9 Thank you Joel...I read this piece at my dad's funeral service as it encompasses exactly who he was..."Salt of the Earth." I wish I was more like him;-)
    Joel Anderson
    28/02/2017 #9 Joel Anderson
    Absolutely spot on. How we live the lines in our lives with passion and humanity. Outlasting excellence at its very core. Keep making a difference my friends one step, one person at a time and our world will be a better more enduring place of positivity.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    27/02/2017 #7 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Prefect Fractal poem to rehash the life lived so far and the rest yet to be spent.

    I wish the dash was an infinity line that never ended. Nevertheless accepting the reality that lies ahead and treasuring the minutes left.
    This poem is perfect @Cyndi wilkins Thank you bless your heart.
    Milos Djukic
    27/02/2017 #6 Anonymous
    #5 Yap :)
    Cyndi wilkins
    27/02/2017 #5 Cyndi wilkins
    #1 #2 #3 #4 ...I think we are all "dashing" along just fine;-)
    Milos Djukic
    27/02/2017 #4 Anonymous
    Fractals and women forever :) A man needs a woman and vice versa. Thanks @Cyndi wilkins and...
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    27/02/2017 #3 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "What matters is how we live and love and how we spend our dash." It is the dashing energy that really, truly matters.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    27/02/2017 #2 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    So beautiful @Cyndi wilkins this goes right into the heart
    Pamela 🐝 Williams
    27/02/2017 #1 Pamela 🐝 Williams
    Lovely Cyndi. A perfect accompaniment to @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. beautiful post.
  18. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Our Lady, Deb Helfrich
    Our Lady, Deb HelfrichAh, our lady Deb A hat adorns her head It’s a lovely shade of green And fit for a Queen Ah, our lady Deb So charming and wise Makes one realize They’ve found a true gem A star caught by the windAh, our lady Deb We...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    28/02/2017 #26 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #21 Don't feel alone, Pascal, I've missed some great posts, which why I like to see them recycled.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    28/02/2017 #25 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #23 Thank you, Bill.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    28/02/2017 #24 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #22 Thank you and it's easy to be inspired to write when you have such a lovely person to write about - our @Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    debasish majumder
    27/02/2017 #22 debasish majumder
    what an amazing and inspiring post, dedicated to our lovely queen bee @Deb 🐝 Helfrich! i am equally glad for madam @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman for sharing such an illuminating post, giving a positive impetus to affinity platform and what true affinity stands for by defining it in a unique dimension! Great share! thank you very much for the share madam.
    Pascal Derrien
    27/02/2017 #21 Pascal Derrien
    how come I have missed that one !!!
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    14/01/2017 #20 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Ha ha You both are very kind. Thank you so much :) Hugs *** @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman @Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/01/2017 #19 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #18 I agree. Deb. She brought back a couple of my buzzes that I had forgotten about. She is a very busy buzzing bee.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    13/01/2017 #18 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #16 #10 We might need to invent the buziest supportive bee of the week award for dear @🐝 Fatima Williams. Or maybe we just call her our favorite Bloodhound as she's been sniffing out all sorts of great content buried under the passage of time.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    13/01/2017 #17 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #12 Thank you @Ali Anani. I appreciate your comments.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    13/01/2017 #16 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #14 Thank you to our lovely bee @🐝 Fatima Williams for bringing this post back around.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    13/01/2017 #15 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #12 Tremendous thanks, @Ali Anani. This community is such a special place filled with so many talented and supportively caring bees. #KindnessReigns is such an appropriate hashtag for the modus operandus of being a worker bee.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    13/01/2017 #14 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #11 @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman, what a special memory. Glad to get an opportunity to thank you again!
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    13/01/2017 #13 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #10 You are a gem, as well, @🐝 Fatima Williams. Thank you for all the ways you have shared your own inner light with me this week. I truly appreciate it!
    Ali Anani
    13/01/2017 #12 Ali Anani
    I love simple; yet meaningful poems such as this one @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman. YOu are a gifted poet and our esteemed friend @Deb 🐝 Helfrich shall enjoy it as well. yes, Deb deserves our expression of love towards her.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    13/01/2017 #11 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #10 Thank you, @🐝 Fatima Williams. Deb is a very special bee.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    13/01/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Awwww this poem is so cute and tailored for @Deb 🐝 Helfrich She is a gem and a treasure to beBee. #beBeesforever
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    26/08/2016 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #8 Thank you @Pamela 🐝 Williams. You'll catch up. Just think of what you have to look forward to when you get home from work.
    Pamela 🐝 Williams
    26/08/2016 #8 Pamela 🐝 Williams
    Fabulous capture of our @Deb 🐝 Helfrich. thank you Franci! See this is why I miss beBee during the day! I'm missing so much wonderful honey!
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    18/08/2016 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #6 Thank you @Deb 🐝 Helfrich. Clink! 🍻
  19. Producer@Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    A Fly That Flew
    A Fly That FlewA bit of fun with words.  I hope this makes you laugh.  It was, after all, my intention.  For me, this was a respite from the seriousness of Life.  I chuckled all the way through the write.  Probably a Hell of a sight, sitting here giggling.A fly...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    25/02/2017 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This post made me smile. A great way to brighten my day. 🤣 Thank you, @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    24/02/2017 #8 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Buzzy buzz I should say with the fly buzzing around.@@Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    Now everytime I see a fly I'm gonna think of you for the rest of my life and never chase it away ( sighhhhh )
    Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    24/02/2017 #7 Bill Stankiewicz, 🐝 Brand Ambassador
    Flys & Clouds do talk!!!
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    24/02/2017 #6 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    If you are glad.... you chose.... to Bee; ...then hey... that fly...it aint crazy! ;)
    Devesh Bhatt
    24/02/2017 #5 Devesh Bhatt
    Delightful. Good Morning . A good way to start the day. Thanks
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    24/02/2017 #4 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    @Gert 🐝 Scholtz I think this is probably my favorite piece. You would have thought the fly and I had lots in common if you had seen me write it. I think I laughed 'til I cried. #3
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    23/02/2017 #3 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen This flew me a smile!
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    11/02/2017 #2 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    I so seldom write anything so light that this was a delight to write 😜 #1
    Sara Jacobovici
    11/02/2017 #1 Sara Jacobovici
    Thanks @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen, I enjoyed it! I smiled throughout and that felt good.
  20. ProducerTausif Mundrawala
    Dive Deep in the Waters
    Dive Deep in the WatersDive deep in the waters, break yourself freefrom being a pauper.explore its depths,by traversing throughits length and breadth.Each ushered tide,brings with it a shiftwhich helps to move with glide.Purge yourselfof all the impurities,by announcing...
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    Tausif Mundrawala
    11/03/2017 #33 Tausif Mundrawala
    #32 I am honored and elated by your feedback. Thanks, @Christina Glazar
    Christina Glazar
    11/03/2017 #32 Christina Glazar
    Beautiful including the illustration ...
    Tausif Mundrawala
    27/02/2017 #31 Tausif Mundrawala
    #30 Thank you so much, @Pascal Derrien for your kind co-operation.
    Pascal Derrien
    27/02/2017 #30 Pascal Derrien
    Kool :-)
    Tausif Mundrawala
    27/02/2017 #29 Tausif Mundrawala
    Thank you so much, @Milos Djukic for sharing this poem in this wonderful hive of our bees.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    27/02/2017 #28 Tausif Mundrawala
    #26 Thank you so much @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen for reading my poem and commenting on it. Thank you so much.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    27/02/2017 #27 Tausif Mundrawala
    #25 Sir, you have been a guiding force for me in this fantastic journey of beBee and would like it to be continued in future. I am blessed to have such wonderful connections and you are one among many.
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    26/02/2017 #26 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    beautiful
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    26/02/2017 #25 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    Pretty much a poem that echoes the essential backbone in learning through which eventually emanates life wisdom.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    26/02/2017 #24 Tausif Mundrawala
    @David Navarro López, @Milos Djukic, @Michael Hrubos, @Mike Macioci
    Tausif Mundrawala
    25/02/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    #21 The intent with which I wrote is poem is achieved. Thank you so much, my friend, Devesh.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    25/02/2017 #22 Tausif Mundrawala
    #20 I am speechless. Thanks for this wonderful message.
    Devesh Bhatt
    25/02/2017 #21 Devesh Bhatt
    I am deep diving in your words and enjoying every bit of it
    Gerald Hecht
    25/02/2017 #20 Gerald Hecht
    This feels like that time I was Scuba Diving...and I was deep enough to make a controlled ascent...my tanks ran out...when I woke up on this dock...I SAW HER! SHE SAVED MY LIFE...It's been 5 years; still I will search the ends of the earth; there will be no other --her, her, her!
    Tausif Mundrawala
    24/02/2017 #19 Tausif Mundrawala
    #18 What else could one ask for than being appreciative of one's work. I highly regard you ,Gert and was anxiously waiting for your response. Wish granted.
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    24/02/2017 #18 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @Tausif Mundrawala Many poignant verses Tausif. This one sticks in my mind: Purge yourself, of all the impurities, by announcing the seizure of insecurities.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    24/02/2017 #17 Tausif Mundrawala
    #16 Thank you so much, Sir. The appreciative note means a lot to me. I can't thank enough to all of you, wonderful bees.
    siraj shaik
    24/02/2017 #16 siraj shaik
    #15 @Tausif Mundrawala awesome expressions.. "quality evaluation (related poetry): when appreciations shared by the maestro @Ali Anani and the best collective nectar contributors @Sara Jacobovici @debasish majumder @Devesh Bhatt (positive comments from them are like pats and applauses). Also there are some more who are perfectionists whose engagement (at least a word mentioned in comments spaces are worth..) and hoping surely they will also join to contribute potential value to this superb poem".
    Tausif Mundrawala
    24/02/2017 #14 Tausif Mundrawala
    #7 By sharing a name of my progeny, your feedback is quite similar to what I receive from her. My friend ,you have always proved yourself indispensable in the intellectual circle and your feedback mean a lot. Thanks once again for acknowledging it as one of the best poems.
  21. Producer@Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    Touch
    TouchWriting became  a perfect medium for me to define trauma in my own way.  Oftentimes, I didn't even know I was writing about trauma--just sharing a story or poem.  Below provides worded images of self-healing, I believe... Touch, I say, it will not...
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    Jan 🐝 Barbosa
    23/03/2017 #12 Jan 🐝 Barbosa
    Thanks @Gary Farmer For Fowarding This !!! Kudos @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen .
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    23/02/2017 #11 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    @Pascal Derrien, @🐝 Fatima Williams @CityVP 🐝 Manjit I am truly humbled by your praise of my words. Thank you all.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    22/02/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Beautiful Beautiful poem with such depth truth and meaning. Even I was waiting to reach the 2nd part of the poem..
    Pascal Derrien
    22/02/2017 #8 Pascal Derrien
    oh gosh.....I really had to force myself to read it until the word tomrrow and glad I did :-)
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    22/02/2017 #7 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    You are laying down great marks Joyce, great marks because of your touch and ultimately they will be felt even more greatly by those who are in most need of this touch.

    May this poem reach those who feel most out of touch, for in reading this, I acknowledge that world which needs this touch most and which has most assuredly received yours. Such are marks left in time.
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    22/02/2017 #6 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    @Devesh Bhatt @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher @Pat 🐝 Bagano @Sara Jacobovici Thank you all. And thanks so much for the shares.
    Sara Jacobovici
    22/02/2017 #5 Sara Jacobovici
    Beautifully, and courageously written @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen. Thank you for sharing.
    Pat 🐝 Bagano
    22/02/2017 #4 Pat 🐝 Bagano
    thank you for this. I love it @@Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    Devesh Bhatt
    22/02/2017 #3 Devesh Bhatt
    #2 but no bear hugs in a beehive. Or life :)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    22/02/2017 #2 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Nice! Touching and hugs are essential for our survival.
    Devesh Bhatt
    22/02/2017 #1 Devesh Bhatt
    A touchscreen shares a beautiful poem about touch written by you.

    This silly handset has some meaning now .

    Thanks
  22. Producerdebasish majumder
    OUR OBSESSION FOR 'BRAND'!
    OUR OBSESSION FOR 'BRAND'!What is ‘Brand’? Is it appears from blue Act as glue And to flummox us with its strand? We are in dilemma How to retain its abstract value A sheer enigma! To make it sustainable We continuously strive. ...
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    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/02/2017 #28 Tausif Mundrawala
    'Whom none dare to vie', Wow. This was a wonderful poem. I can't resist myself commenting on this great piece, my friend. This entire box would seem insufficient for me to comment on each and every line as it deserves close reading. Thanks for sharing this poem with us, @debasish majumder
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    11/02/2017 #27 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #26 I am grateful to be able to pass the inspiration along, especially as your words are combined in such a skillful way to jerk us out of our complacency for a chance to understand the unexpected.
    debasish majumder
    10/02/2017 #26 debasish majumder
    #25 thank you very much madam @Deb 🐝 Helfrich for your continuous support and admiration, which actually source of inspiration for me to write more. i am privileged and honored.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    10/02/2017 #25 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    Absolutely every word needed about the concept of branding, @debasish majumder. These few pinpoint it for me:

    "We are in dilemma

    How to retain its abstract value

    Focusing for humanity is its prime entity"
    debasish majumder
    10/02/2017 #24 debasish majumder
    thank you very much madam @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman for your cordial appreciation and support. i am privileged and honored.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    10/02/2017 #23 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Quite timely and well done, Debasish. You've chosen the perfect words to describe "brand".
    debasish majumder
    09/02/2017 #22 debasish majumder
    #21 thank you very much @Gert 🐝 Scholtz for your continuous support and admiration for me. i am privileged and honored.
    Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    09/02/2017 #21 Gert 🐝 Scholtz
    @debasish majumder Your poetry reflects the hardship of the everyday laborer - for whom brand has very different significance. You reach all the strands of the concept of brand and I like this line the most: Where ‘I’ is the product of majority’s ‘Eye’. Great, great poetry!
    @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    09/02/2017 #20 @Joyce 🐝 Bowen
    So relevant to the times.
    Gerald Hecht
    09/02/2017 #19 Gerald Hecht
    Great poetry --the word "brand", however I've been saturated with as of late; the ride through the tides however is great!
    debasish majumder
    09/02/2017 #18 debasish majumder
    #11 thank you very much for your cordial appreciation @🐝 Fatima Williams. i am privileged and honored.
    Ali Anani
    09/02/2017 #17 Ali Anani
    I agree with you dear @CityVP 🐝 Manjit. In complex systems we need to look backwards to understand what happened. We shall not be able to predict the same. SOmetimes looking in the rear mirror helps a lot. BYW- I have just uploaded my new buzz.
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    09/02/2017 #16 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    #14 Dear @Ali Anani so long as it creates metaphorical muscle and a stronger mind, I look forward already to 2020 because then that is the time to look back to today - if learning is easy, it is not learning - if reflection does not burn deep it is only a cheap orgasm and the word RUACH still means something much greater than any of us realize and it is certainly not an "orgasm" :-)
    Ali Anani
    09/02/2017 #15 Ali Anani
    #12 My dear friend @CityVP 🐝 Manjit- In few minutes I am uploading a buzz titled "The Complexity of Choices" and I dedicate it to you. I hope it would reflect my admiration for your maladjustment.
    Ali Anani
    09/02/2017 #14 Ali Anani
    #12 I am glad I keep playing the devil's role with your my dear friend @CityVP 🐝 Manjit. With all honesty I am much more inclined towards your "cry of pain". Your comment spoke my heart and mind.
    Yogesh Sukal
    09/02/2017 #13 Yogesh Sukal
    Amazing Poem Debasish, Its like surfing. To make our own brand is getting on the wave , but to maintain balance & ride with tide needs the principles of physics.

    cc @CityVP 🐝 Manjit @David B. Grinberg @John White, MBA @Ali Anani @Federico 🐝 Álvarez San Martín @Gerald Hecht
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    09/02/2017 #12 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    #9 Dear @Ali Anani my views on mass personal branding are not a stand, they are a cry of pain, a cry of deep anguished pain, the kind of anguish citizens of the world are feeling right now because they are powerless in watching that marketer called Trump dumbing down America. I don't mind this kind of anguish or this kind of existential limitation because the net result is through it I am the one will get stronger. I will triumph from this pain, I am developing a smarter mind, spirit and body for encountering this.

    When the very Presidency of the United States has been reduced to the level of a marketer, this is an excellent time for me to encounter this relationship with mass personal branding. Do you think that Nelson Mandela was weakened because he was put in jail. Once Mandela secured his baseline which was not to get killed by the Apartheid regime, then the years he spent in Ellis Island with the struggle, is what made him.

    Once Mandela was released from a dumb political system, his captors had already negotiated their own survival with him and once they knew that Mandela would protect them, he walked out of his jail - thanking the people who imprisoned him. I likewise will thank those that imprison me - this is not a stand, just as Mandela was not making a stand, he was allowing the struggle to work on him, he embraced the struggle and when he was free, he thanked the struggle. As he said in his own words, it was the struggle that made ordinary men, extraordinary. By 2020 the dumb President of Marketing will be out and a new era begins in America - and the next three years are not definitely not a stand, it is merely an imprisonment - the best kind for a developing mind.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    09/02/2017 #11 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Where ‘I’ is the product of majority’s ‘Eye’

    What a beautiful meaningful poem @debasish majumder I enjoyed reading this. Thank you
    Ali Anani
    09/02/2017 #10 Ali Anani
    #7 DEra @CityVP 🐝 Manjit- I know of your stand and I respect it fully. This is very consistent with your writing here "Personal brand is about being ADJUSTED, but I am maladjusted". In complex systems, small adjustments might lead to even more maladjustment. So, in practical terms I find myself on the same boat.
    Ali Anani
    09/02/2017 #9 Ali Anani
    #7 DEra @CityVP 🐝 Manjit- I know of your stand and I respect it fully. This is very consistent with your writing here "Personal brand is about being ADJUSTED, but I am maladjusted". In complex systems, small adjustments might lead to even more maladjustment. So, in practical terms I find myself on the same boat.
  23. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Out There
    Out ThereIn a universe so vast there exists our roleWhat part we play from day to dayCreated the past defines the presentand births the futureGiven only one chance to play our roleWe must partake or eternally seal our fateSuccumbing to the dreaded black...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    09/02/2017 #12 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #11 Aww, thank you, @Donna-Luisa Eversley. 💐
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    08/02/2017 #11 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman..You bring us the universe in all its glory 😁
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #10 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #9 Thank you so much, @🐝 Fatima Williams. I love the fact that you read into the meaning of my poetry and what I am trying to convey. I like to convey a message with my poetry and hope I am not the only one that gets it. 😃
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    08/02/2017 #9 🐝 Fatima Williams
    #8 Ahh I wanted to comment too. It's been so hectic. Again Love the poem.
    The depth in the meaning of the line "Their Hollowed soul been sold" Is a person with a Hollowed soul good or bad . I'm thinking.
    Perhaps they missed used their one chance!
    "Given only one chance to play our role
    We must partake or eternally seal our fate"

    I do visit your poetry website for solace sometimes.Love your contributions Priceless 🤗🐝🤗
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for the shares dear @🐝 Fatima Williams
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #6 Thank you 😃
    Pascal Derrien
    08/02/2017 #6 Pascal Derrien
    Efficient ☺
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #5 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for the shares, @David B. Grinberg
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #4 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #2 Thank you, @debasish majumder. I appreciate you commenting.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    08/02/2017 #3 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #1 Thank you, @David B. Grinberg. I am glad you liked it. "A pale blue dot" - yes, great observation.
    debasish majumder
    08/02/2017 #2 debasish majumder
    wonderful expression @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman! great insight! enjoyed read. thank you very much for the share madam.
    David B. Grinberg
    08/02/2017 #1 David B. Grinberg
    I love your creative writing, Franci. Very nice! Copernicus once convinced the science community of his day that the Earth was the center of the Universe. Boy, was he ever wrong. It's more like we are an infinitesimal nano particle of one grain of sand on all the beaches of the world combined. Or, as the Carl Sagan once observed, "A pale blue dot" in the vastness of our own solar system.
  24. ProducerKen Boddie

    Ken Boddie

    02/02/2017
    My Words
    My WordsTempted to submit a WORD for Sara Jacobovici's Wednesday Word(s) of the Week, I stumbled about in a web of terms and expressions, so many weird and wonderful words, whacky and woeful words, all wandering around in my head ..... and then it came to...
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    Ken Boddie
    05/02/2017 #45 Ken Boddie
    #44 This is praise indeed from the custodian of our weekly humour tonics and the goddess of grammar. Thanks for popping in, Susan.
    Susan Rooks
    04/02/2017 #44 Susan Rooks
    #38 Holy something or other, @Todd Jones! Weaving me into a poem just rocks!

    And as I hadn't even seen either @Sara Jacobovici's original post or this one by @Ken Boddie, I am triply grateful. And what talent is on display here -- a talent I don't have, I fear.
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    04/02/2017 #43 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    #42 @Ken Boddie ..wonder if that's why my teeth are shaking 😀😀😀😀
    Ken Boddie
    04/02/2017 #42 Ken Boddie
    #41 Thanks, DLE, but I hope I didn't knock any teeth out. 😟
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    04/02/2017 #41 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    @Ken Boddie..Wow that was a powerful punch you just shared.Loved it 🌼🐝
    Todd Jones
    04/02/2017 #40 Todd Jones
    #39 Your money is safe, Ken. It's your inspired wit that I would like to adopt!
    Ken Boddie
    04/02/2017 #39 Ken Boddie
    #38 I do like you poem, Todd, and your reference to one of my Fbees, @Susan Rooks but I do want to emphasise that I hope it's not 'YOU' who wants to steal my money. 😂
    Todd Jones
    03/02/2017 #38 Todd Jones
    Lettered squares, on the keyboard rattle…
    Crafting tales, of pleasure and battle.

    A major peril, lurking with each stroke…
    Is an unclear tone, that leaves intention broke.

    For the very same words, can have different meaning…
    Depending on where, the emphasis is leaning.

    I have seen a few comments, raise prodigious ire…
    As uncertain gist, leaves much to be desired.

    This I have learned, from @Susan Rooks
    The Grammar Goddess post, deserves a second look.

    https://www.bebee.com/producer/@susan-rooks/american-grammar-checkup-are-we-being-clear
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #36 Ken Boddie
    Thanks for joining in, Mohd, and for your observation and interpretation, but my poem is not entirely 'unconditional'.

    Words of abuse should not be let loose,
    Should things get too hot then lets call a truce.
    mohammed khalaf
    03/02/2017 #35 mohammed khalaf
    I think all that words from gold and the poem is extended to strangers, it is boundless and it is unconditional.
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    03/02/2017 #34 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    #33 Amen you Space Cowboy! ;)
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #33 Ken Boddie
    #31 Magical words may hurt now and then,
    But Steve Miller's band will heal us again. 🎷🎸🎼
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #32 Ken Boddie
    #28 As you have guessed, Praveen,
    I'm too tied to my cabana,
    And besides I'm way too mean,
    To transcend into Nirvana. 😈
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    03/02/2017 #31 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    #29 Round n round, round it goes
    where it stops, nobody knows...Abracadabra-doo to you too Ken! ;)
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #30 Ken Boddie
    #26 Thanks so much, Lisa, and may I suggest:

    Review your words twice,
    And ensure they're all nice,
    Prevention is clever,
    'Cause regrets last forever. 😢
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #29 Ken Boddie
    #25 Beware, my friend, the magic pen,
    Which writes abracadabra,
    Twill stir the chook that you would cook,
    And have it come and grab ya. 🐥
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    03/02/2017 #28 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    #27 No doubting that Ken,
    I just noticed that you jumped
    to Cloud 9,
    before touching Seventh Heaven! ;)
    Ken Boddie
    03/02/2017 #27 Ken Boddie
    #24 No words were harmed in the fabrication of this poem, Praveen. No nails were used. All words were perfectly joined together by traditional grammatical construction. 😇
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    03/02/2017 #26 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    What a great poem and good timing with this! My favorite part (well I enjoyed the entire poem) "Words can do so many things,

    Give us wings or pull our strings.

    When we carefully choose our words,

    We can melt an army's swords. "

    We've all used words we do regret
    It's a learning curve at times, I bet.
    One can only hope through regret,
    we choose our words with thoughts of love and respect.
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    03/02/2017 #25 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    #18 Was that a Rooster or a Hen
    my dear distant Dean Owen?
    Oh I ken, I do ken about dear Ken,
    he hath poured some magic into his pen! ;)
  25. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Boondoggle
    BoondoggleI shilly-shally and dilly-dally I lag, drag and lollygag I pause, poke and postpone I linger, loiter and stall Alas! What’s to come of it all? If I wait until tomorrow There’ll be no time to borrow It’s okay, I’ll suspend my sorrow “I can’t...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    04/02/2017 #4 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #3 Great addition, Praveen. Thank you for joining in.
    Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    03/02/2017 #3 Praveen Raj Gullepalli
    You thief of time, you!
    Stealing away on the wafting aroma of a hot cuppa coffee;
    Ready to suspend even her sorrow,
    Look what you've done to dear Franci!

    Cornered by Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow,
    left with no time to borrow;
    Do you think we can cheat you,
    wearing a mask of Zorro?

    ;)

    (A quick one on the run for you dear Franci)
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    03/02/2017 #2 🐝 Fatima Williams
    I liked it Franci Thank you ☺
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    03/02/2017 #1 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for sharing my silly poem, @🐝 Fatima Williams.
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