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I Started a Poem

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I started a poem
Can’t keep it goin
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Leavin the rest up to you
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  1. Producerdebasish majumder
    ENIGMA OF SHADOW!
    ENIGMA OF SHADOW!Earth has no dearthSpecies of myriad, initially in lurchLater with favorable conditionsNature provides with grand renditionsBees, birds, flowers and numerous livesEntwine with a unique vibesWhat a fabulous ambianceOur planet Earth only bears the...
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    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    23/04/2017 #13 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    I always find your writings to be respites.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    23/04/2017 #12 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    I adore the core message, it creates hope for all humans! thank you @debasish majumder
    debasish majumder
    23/04/2017 #10 debasish majumder
    #8 thank you very much @Deb🐝 Lange, Brand Ambassador @beBee for your warm commendation. i am privileged and honored. i try to draw only images through poetry out of the reflections i receive madam.
    debasish majumder
    23/04/2017 #9 debasish majumder
    #5 i guess, all people use to draw images our of their genetic code where carbon plays the essential role, copying his or her lineage sir @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee! The shadow which propound on him or her, guiding or enabling to lead a life accordingly. no wonder, changing external circumstances to impact on him and that too being copied and eventually endowed to the forthcoming generations. in my poem i tried to draw the picture and its impact on us.
    Deb🐝 Lange, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    23/04/2017 #8 Deb🐝 Lange, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Wow you are such a prolific poet! Have you ever drawn images with your poetry?
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    23/04/2017 #5 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    "Life only rolls on with a mystic synopsis"! Brilliant dear @debasish majumder. I just wonder if you were to describe people by their shadows what would you say! I find your short-lines are more effective and I strongly advise you of writing shorter lines because they are more effective. That you can embed so much wisdom in few lines is truly admirable.
  2. ProducerLiesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    The Path Of The Mentor And The Student.
    The Path Of The Mentor And The Student.The trees are humble and silent.Their path is perfectly designed.Each tree once was a strong lesson.Learned through life's ups and downs.Separately the trees are less powerful.Together they are able to sing a whole song.Their story becomes visible...
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    Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    22/04/2017 #44 Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    Lovely evocation of life as trees/trees as life @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.. I do find that there's something very peaceful and stress - relieving about sitting and watching trees gently swaying in the breeze
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    22/04/2017 #43 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    #36 beautiful answer @Lisa Vanderburg thank you so much
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    22/04/2017 #40 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    #39 and your comments stand out to me, very wise and true thank you @Kevin Baker
    Kevin Baker
    22/04/2017 #39 Kevin Baker
    This is the sentence that stands out for me "" The strength and purity of nature always supports us in the most mysterious way. "" The more we listen to our instinct the higher quality of life we live. The further from nature we stray we lose that part of us that defines us as human.
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    21/04/2017 #38 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Love it 🤗🤗🤗
    Susan 🐝 Rooks
    21/04/2017 #37 Susan 🐝 Rooks
    Wow, @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc., just wow. Lovely. Thank you.
    Lisa Vanderburg
    21/04/2017 #36 Lisa Vanderburg
    Lovely @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. - just lovely! I have been observing the long demise of the great Horse Chestnut. This long journey into extinction is an equally long vigil and each year, as their three-pronged disease brings them closer, I watch. I wait. I applaud their valiant efforts at renewal...but we are mere mortals.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    21/04/2017 #35 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    #34 thank you @John Rylance.
    John Rylance
    21/04/2017 #34 John Rylance
    The evocative poem complements the picture which in turn brings a serenity to the poem.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    21/04/2017 #33 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    #32 fully agree with you @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman and thank you so much; for your reading and comments!
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    21/04/2017 #32 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is a beautiful and powerful verse, in itself - "Separately the trees are less powerful.

    Together they are able to sing a whole song.

    Their story becomes visible only after all experiences gained."

    Mankind can learn so much from nature, @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.,
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    21/04/2017 #31 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    #30 what a beautiful memory / experience you share with us @Laura Mikolaitis, it is really beautiful what you have said, thank you.
    Laura Mikolaitis
    21/04/2017 #30 Laura Mikolaitis
    Beautiful, @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.. The imagery that you create with your words is very peaceful and instills hope. Just yesterday I was walking among the pines in a local park near my office. It was a beautiful day and I found peace along the pathway lined with nature's arms. There's vitality in our natural surroundings when we give in to it. Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed it.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    21/04/2017 #28 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    "The strength and purity of nature always supports us in the most mysterious way". This is a superb line @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.You are a gifted write rand poet. I love the flow of your writing. It touches the heart. Sharing
    Vincent Manlapaz
    21/04/2017 #26 Vincent Manlapaz
    Good thoughts here: As long as we connect our hearts and souls to the messages of our mentors. Thanks for sharing.
  3. ProducerLaurent Boscherini
    Morenita
    MorenitaShe comes to vibrate with you,Without seeing already the meaning,Since the time pure life thinking,When it grows that winter afternoon,In the reservation of the pleasure,Simple without cruelty a life,In the purity a dream as a treasure,A life whole...
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    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    20/04/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Wow Love it @Laurent Boscherini Life is sometimes so unreasonable as a beautiful madness in the same time ! This is so true.
    Gulcin Newby Kennett
    20/04/2017 #9 Gulcin Newby Kennett
    Amazing song and beautiful poem @Laurent Boscherini. Thank you for sharing.
    Gert Scholtz
    19/04/2017 #8 Gert Scholtz
    @Laurent Boscherini Wow and wow again! Moving poetry!
    Bonnie Au
    19/04/2017 #6 Anonymous
    Merci @Laurent Boscherini for the beautiful poem, the wonderful picture and the amazing song. That "Morenita" is one lucky chica!!
    Laurent Boscherini
    19/04/2017 #5 Anonymous
    Thank you @Deb 🐝 Helfrich and @Javier 🐝 beBee for your very kind words, always very supporting.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    19/04/2017 #4 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    Phenomenal words of the truth of two, together, @Laurent Boscherini. And that header picture - Incredible! Both the poem and the visual have brought me right back into the joy of life.

    We just never know who or what we will come across!
    Javier 🐝 beBee
    19/04/2017 #3 Javier 🐝 beBee
    @Laurent Boscherini you rock !
    Laurent Boscherini
    19/04/2017 #2 Anonymous
    #1 Thank you @Pascal Derrien for your bright support, you are a soulman ;)
    Pascal Derrien
    19/04/2017 #1 Pascal Derrien
    Everything is kool the writing, the visual and the music :-)
  4. Producerdebasish majumder
    ENIGMA IN BRAIN!
    ENIGMA IN BRAIN!Human cerebral Supreme its character, sheer phenomenal It alone can perceive The rare capacity, hardly any creature can conceive It receives the signals being sent by five senses It synthesize with its overbearing presence...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    22/04/2017 #18 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #16 I agree. He has a unique and brilliant style and he is an asset to beBee.
    debasish majumder
    19/04/2017 #17 debasish majumder
    #16 thanks sir @Ben Pinto for your warm commendation. i am privileged and honored.
    Ben Pinto
    19/04/2017 #16 Ben Pinto
    I love how @debasish majumder can take science and be poetic about it. He is equally a great scholar of life as a poet.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    18/04/2017 #12 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Your poem is consistent with what once I described you @debasish majumder- the scientific poet of beBee. I wonder if you were a teacher of science how often you would use poetry in teaching science. This poem is rich in ideas and creative imagination.
    Gert Scholtz
    18/04/2017 #10 Gert Scholtz
    @debasish majumder "Hardly have we comprehended how it behave, Whether it is particle or wave, Yet, it plays a significant role, Determining our vision, mission as well ambition." Your depth of poetry astonishes me Debasish. A wonderful work.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    18/04/2017 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Another beautifully crafted piece, @debasish majumder. "Light plays an intriguing act " - yes, and in everything we encounter.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    17/04/2017 #8 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    I want to see all your gems in a book @debasish majumder
    debasish majumder
    17/04/2017 #7 debasish majumder
    #1 thank you very much for your appreciation @Qamar Ali Khan. i am privileged and honored.
    Qamar Ali Khan
    17/04/2017 #1 Qamar Ali Khan
    Beautiful as always @debasish majumder! Lovely!
  5. ProducerTausif Mundrawala
    An Unannounced Event
    An Unannounced EventBy pursuing higher studies,he wanted to get rid of all worries.Always had an eye for detail,well prepared to sail through howling gale.Winds came gushing on this horrendous rainy night,he could sense an awaited dreadful blight.showers came from the...
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    Savvy Raj
    17/04/2017 #27 Savvy Raj
    #25 Totally likewise @Tausif Mundrawala Here's to an inspiring week ahead.
    Sweta Parmar
    16/04/2017 #26 Sweta Parmar
    I am honoured and blessed to be in ur list . Regards!#21
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #25 Tausif Mundrawala
    #17 I am speechless with such a wonderful feedback. You are an excellent poet my friend, @Savvy Raj
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #24 Tausif Mundrawala
    #19 Getting conferred a title of grandmaster by you is an achievement for me. You are our Grand Master, Sir. I have learned a lot from you as well Sir Ali Anani because you both bring your experiences to this wonderful platform in the form of buzzes and comments.

    God Bless you always, Sir @CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    #13 I have pursued a MOOC on songwriting but as you are motivating me to pen a song then it became necessary for me to pursue that course once again. I agree with you that anything can happen. Thank you so much for this excellent feedback, SIr @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee View more
    #13 I have pursued a MOOC on songwriting but as you are motivating me to pen a song then it became necessary for me to pursue that course once again. I agree with you that anything can happen. Thank you so much for this excellent feedback, SIr @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee. I liked you adding Brand ambassador with your name. I am blessed to be connected with you, Sir.

    Thanks for making this buzz as interactive as you could. I am elated. Close
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #22 Tausif Mundrawala
    #12 I have always highly regarded your comments my friend @🐝 Fatima G. Williams. And thanks for such a wonderful interaction with Sir @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee and Sir @CityVP 🐝 Manjit. I am glad to be connected with you all. Have a great weekend ahead.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #21 Tausif Mundrawala
    #11 Thank you so much @Sweta Parmar for your friendly support. I am blessed to be connected to you.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    16/04/2017 #20 Tausif Mundrawala
    #10 I am honored and felicitated to be appreciated by a renowned poet like you my friend, @debasish majumder
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    15/04/2017 #19 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    Exquisite flow Tausif - now add some music to these riffs and who knows "Grandmaster Tausif"?
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    15/04/2017 #18 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    #14 Remember that I am not a fan of mass personal branding or but I am a champion of top notch professionals. As for the word grand, of course! why not use it - except it comes with a huge caveat, because there is nothing more grand in this world than a GRAND-PA.

    Now it terms of personal brand and the social prejudices it produces, do you think that there would be a change in perception if I were to change my name from CityVP Manjit to Grandpa Manjit. As you can see this is the problem with personal brand, we become conscious of perception, because grand-pa is associated with retirement and in retirement exists the brand prejudice.

    Do my grandchildren recognize my personal brand? Not a chance and they never will because to them I will always be PAPA.

    BUT WAIT

    If you want to get into rap or HipHop - but on some bling-bling and now you can associate with people like Grandmaster Flash
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PobrSpMwKk4 Then there is Grandmaster Caz https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iRgmexU1h70 who sings that he is not retiring. It is not the word grand that matters but the context of that grand :-)
    Savvy Raj
    15/04/2017 #17 Savvy Raj
    Stark reality bites indeed but the circle of life moves on leaving imprints of lasting wisdom garnered in the life and living ...Poignantly penned .@Tausif Mundrawala
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    15/04/2017 #16 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    #15 Because I am running for "mental collision" with my friend #@CityVP 🐝 Manjit. How about Grand Brand?
    It was a mistake and I didn't mean to say that I am grand. Thank you my friend @🐝 Fatima G. Williams, but I am sure you know that I don't want to describe myself as grand. If I am, let others say it. Thank you for your grand support
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    15/04/2017 #15 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    #14 But I liked Grand @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee Why did you change it. It should be Grand Ambassador this was a sweet mistake which is true.

    I'm sure Javier will agree with me :)
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    15/04/2017 #14 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    #12 I changed the Grand to Brand @🐝 Fatima G. Williams. Now, @CityVP 🐝 Manjit will have something to say. An ambassador for beBee has to be Grand and this is the unannounced branding of beBee. @Javier 🐝 beBee may have a consideration for this suggestion..
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    15/04/2017 #13 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    "with it emerges billowing smoke of dust,
    alerted everyone that something went bust".
    @Tausif Mundrawala- imagination is fertile in you and your poetry floes smoothly. It is great to read a poem of yours because you use singing rhymes. I don't know if you have ever written a song, but I feel that you could easily be a song writer and that a known singer shall sing your words.
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    15/04/2017 #12 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    @Tausif Mundrawala You pen down reality in your poems. Such is the case with many.
    "By pursuing higher studies,
    he wanted to get rid of all worries."

    Isn't that what we were taught at schools and by the people around us. As important as education is they forget to teach us about the
    "showers that come from the darkest crown,
    where the rear structure can come crumbling down."

    Great piece :)
    Sweta Parmar
    15/04/2017 #11 Sweta Parmar
    You are unique 🙏🏻Hat's off
    debasish majumder
    15/04/2017 #10 debasish majumder
    lovely insight @Tausif Mundrawala! enjoyed read. thank you for the share.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/04/2017 #9 Tausif Mundrawala
    #8 I am honored to be connected with you my friend and I value each and every kind word of yours. I am elated. Thank you so much for making my weekend with this fantastic feedback my friend, @Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    15/04/2017 #8 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "This unannounced event changed his entire life,
    he became humble and with future he never had a strife."

    What a stirring couplet, @Tausif Mundrawala - because very young is the person who has not encountered an unannounced event.... those who can create peace while struggling with these visits are those who will find what their future truly holds in store.
  6. ProducerChris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    Poem for Manjit
    Poem for ManjitAfter recently reading a lot of CityVP 🐝 Manjit 's very insightful and interesting posts I was moved to write a short poem for him:Mr.City VP Manjit Has an attitude of “can do it” The depth and breadth of his vast insight Is invariably a beeBe...
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    Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    13/04/2017 #6 Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    #5 My absolute pleasure @CityVP 🐝 Manjit...and continue going on that treadmill.I am running a 5km race tomorrow at the instance of my 15 yr old son!
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    13/04/2017 #5 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    Unexpected, humbling and deeply appreciated Chris. All I can echo is Ali Anani's WOW! Insight - Delight - Light are really good values and just those three words are words to live by, because there is much more scope for insight, much more room for delight and more humility for finding light. At the time of writing this poem I am comprehending the words of Don Miguel Ruiz and his Toltec wisdom in "The Four Agreements" and these sound simple but are extraordinarily challenging and profound :

    1. Be impeccable with your word
    2.Don't take anything personally
    3. Don't make assumptions
    4. Always do your best

    What your poem teaches me is that like an onion, we have layers of insight - delight - light. Then we learn and we transition and transform to a richer layer, realizing that each of these three things is but a horizon. A horizon is something we can all see, but also something we can never reach.

    At the same time I see the words Insight - Delight - Light, I see the letters IDL or ideal or idol or idle - and so I fully embrace Insight - Delight - Light, but I will be mindful of IDL. That is where the Toltec wisdom articulated by Ruiz points out the dream we create and being mindful and aware of these dreams. In this learning journey I look forward to sailing beside you, because my journey is a sail and not a sale. I choose this personal culture others choose personal brand - but we all learn. Thank You!
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    13/04/2017 #4 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    WOW! Thank you @Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA) for writing this delightful poetry and dedicating it to @CityVP 🐝 Manjit. You are right and Manjit's buzzes and comments are truly delight to read.
    Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    13/04/2017 #3 Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA)
    Thanks @🐝 Fatima G. Williams. have enjoyed and picked up a lot from the buzzes of @CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    13/04/2017 #2 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Nice one @Chris 🐝 Guest Certified Prof.Accountant (SA) He is one of a kind rare and unique ! "The depth and breadth of his vast insight , Is invariably a beeBe readers delight" #True :)
  7. Producerdebasish majumder
    NEWS TO BE ONLY BEMUSED?
    NEWS TO BE ONLY BEMUSED?Past propounds on future Death propounds on living Share propounds on giving Amazing! Where we are exactly heading? News are now only aiming to create sensation T.R.P. and profit is our only intension Devoid of reality...
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    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    13/04/2017 #12 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    without trees no bees, thank you for again a gem of a honey delicious post that reminds us to be grateful for what nature offers @debasish majumder
    Lisa Vanderburg
    13/04/2017 #11 Lisa Vanderburg
    #10 the honour and privilege is all mine, sincerely @debasish majumder
    debasish majumder
    13/04/2017 #10 debasish majumder
    #9 thank you very much madam @Lisa Vanderburg for sharing your valued comment. i am privileged and honored.
    Lisa Vanderburg
    13/04/2017 #9 Lisa Vanderburg
    We become slaves to what we create @debasish majumder, as you so rightly suggest in this soulful reflection. Wherever we are going we are bound to leave behind a scorched earth.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    13/04/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thought-provoking poem, @debasish majumder. Where are we heading? Good question.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    13/04/2017 #7 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Missing, but not found is the truth of self, of surroundings and the world. You are right dear@debasish majumder. Flowing poem with great emotions.
    Gerald Hecht
    12/04/2017 #6 Gerald Hecht
    Thank you kindly for tagging me @debasish majumder thought provoking. A lot of truth seems (in this world) to be missing or something; yet the number of graduating broadcast/journalist majors keeps increasing; as do the number of green screens, cameras and microphones...and (I guess) they gotta say something...
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    12/04/2017 #3 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Amazing! Where we are exactly heading?

    A question I ask myself everyday ! Every word from your poem is truth that needs to be testified. Fantastic work again @debasish majumder
  8. ProducerNeto Montana

    Neto Montana

    09/04/2017
    The lack of poetry and the excess of speed
    The lack of poetry and the excess of speedPoetry is the cry, the abyss, the flexibility of expressing, the being and not being of the being ... the decreed anguish, the ways told in the day to day, the want of the limited being, the non-being of the ghosts that Surround the garden...
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    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    09/04/2017 #2 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Wow beautiful @Neto Montana Welcome to beBeeland 🤗🐝🤗
    Javier 🐝 beBee
    09/04/2017 #1 Javier 🐝 beBee
    @Neto Montana welcome to beBee !
  9. Producerdebasish majumder
    INTRICACIES OF LIFE, A CONUNDRUM!
    INTRICACIES OF LIFE, A CONUNDRUM!Three in oneIn every event we noticed their intriguing accumulationIf you point one finger on meRepudiating rationality to fleeExpressing your vexation, annoyance or intoleranceWith adamancy and arroganceTo produce an ambiance of anathema and...
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    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    09/04/2017 #15 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Check and balance is necessarily needed to kindle the ethical flavor of humanism ! Humanism still exists when I look at people like you.Thank you @debasish majumder
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    09/04/2017 #12 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    life is simple: seeds of good create more good, the inverse is also true, your poems (seeds of joy) create more of beauty in this world @debasish majumder, thank YOU
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    09/04/2017 #11 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    "Check and balance is necessarily needed to kindle the ethical flavor of humanism" This is so true @debasish majumder! Right now when I think of humanity, I get reminded of the children who were gassed in Syria. My heart just breaks. I will never in my life understand how any human could harm another human, let alone children who are innocent. Well done!
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    09/04/2017 #10 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    "Check and balance is necessarily needed to kindle the ethical flavor of humanism" - Oh, so true @debasish majumder. Excellent message and beautifully written.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    09/04/2017 #9 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "Empathy, sympathy and fellow feelings with élan

    We conglomerated as a united clan"

    Marvelous message, @debasish majumder - you've created a much more stylish version of my Bee a Hive-Player. Well created!
    Lyon Brave
    09/04/2017 #8 Lyon Brave
    Abraham Lincoln is my Boyfriend
    debasish majumder
    09/04/2017 #7 debasish majumder
    #6 i am afraid, when you feeling stop penning?
    Reginaldo Afonso Bobato
    08/04/2017 #6 Reginaldo Afonso Bobato
    When a feel bad, i write. When i feel good, i write. When i do not feeel ntthing, i write
  10. ProducerRandall Burns

    Randall Burns

    02/04/2017
    Early Morning Coffee...
    Early Morning Coffee...(written for my wife, Cindy)   As I was having my early morning coffee the Moon whispered to me that she was waiting to set until you woke up as your smile brightens the whole world and she didn't want to miss it...         As I was having my early...
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    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    03/04/2017 #4 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    So beautiful @Randall Burns Cindy is a very lucky women. God bless you guys :) Great buzz
    Lada 🏡 Prkic
    03/04/2017 #3 Lada 🏡 Prkic
    This morning, while my husband was making my early morning coffee, I was thinking how lucky I am. He is always the first to wake up and prepares me a cup of coffee before I go to work. I drink only one cup a day, just this early morning one made with love.
    What a lovely post dedicated to your wife, Randal! :-)
    Ken Boddie
    03/04/2017 #2 Ken Boddie
    So beautifully written and illustrated, Randy. And he can cook too, ladies!
    I hope your good lady wife appreciates you, mate.
    Incidentally, my morning coffee (I ration myself to one per day while in the office) is delivered to me via a travelling barista who comes to the office door in a large van. No romance involved with drinking my coffee. Perhaps I need to get up earlier and appreciate the dawn more often?
    Sara Jacobovici
    02/04/2017 #1 Sara Jacobovici
    Lucky Cindy and lucky you! Beautiful words, images and sentiments @Randall Burns.
  11. Producerdebasish majumder
    NATURE'S CONFUSING CLAMOR!
    NATURE'S CONFUSING CLAMOR!What is eternal in nature? Production and distribution in a grand accentuate gesture The basis of social relations to evolve In a complex network, epoch after epoch New synthesis of social fabric Where we are confused of our...
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    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    03/04/2017 #10 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    @debasish majumder poems grow like flowers blossoming in the garden of beBee, again a creme de la creme piece of art
    Brian McKenzie
    03/04/2017 #9 Brian McKenzie
    I would challenge that rhetoric is not Occassion but rather Constant, Incessant, Ever-present 😆
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    03/04/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is powerful, debasish. I ditto @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee and I am sharing your buzz, as well.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    02/04/2017 #7 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Humanity’s choice
    Which we overwhelmingly rejoice
    With a hope to obliterate discrimination
    Chaos, blood-shed and unequal distribution
    The primary elements responsible for all abhorrence and conflictions

    I feel your words dear @debasish and cry for less discrimination and more of justice. It is a legitimate call and so I shared your buzz.
    debasish majumder
    02/04/2017 #6 debasish majumder
    @Emilia M. Ludovino, @Matt 🐝 Sweetwood, @Gerald Hecht, @Marcos Vinicius Fernandes Ferreira, @Federico 🐝 Álvarez San Martín,@Maria Luquero Vila
  12. ProducerYogesh Sukal

    Yogesh Sukal

    02/04/2017
    beBee
    beBee Bee's are making fun here with sweet honey & buzzing idea's,Come and explore beBee, one of coolest social media's,Happy to be bee producing honey on beBee live,As buzz is getting louder & rhythmic on various hive,Uniqueness of each bee is...
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    Yogesh Sukal
    04/04/2017 #19 Yogesh Sukal
    Thank you for enriching the buzz @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. with your valuable comment.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    03/04/2017 #18 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    your post is creating the sound of a dynamic and forever smiling bee, it works contagious, well done @Yogesh Sukal
    Gerald Hecht
    02/04/2017 #17 Gerald Hecht
    🎯 @Yogesh Sukal !
    Yogesh Sukal
    02/04/2017 #15 Yogesh Sukal
    #11 You are welcome. Thank you for encouraging note.
    Yogesh Sukal
    02/04/2017 #14 Yogesh Sukal
    #13 Thank you @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman. Yes I do ☺
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    02/04/2017 #13 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Well done. I feel the swarm, don't you?
    Tausif Mundrawala
    02/04/2017 #11 Tausif Mundrawala
    Excellently penned my friend. What could be the better way to dedicate an entire buzz to all of us bees. Though brief but the words are still ringing in my mind. Beautiful. Thanks for tagging me, @Yogesh Sukal
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    02/04/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Nice buzz on :) @Yogesh Sukal
    David Martín Alonso
    02/04/2017 #9 David Martín Alonso
    Nice and Sweet
    Ken Boddie
    02/04/2017 #8 Ken Boddie
    Keep on buzzin', cousin. 👍
    Maria Oslara
    02/04/2017 #7 Maria Oslara
    Beautiful!!
    Yogesh Sukal
    02/04/2017 #6 Yogesh Sukal
    Thank you for share @Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    02/04/2017 #5 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    What a great little buzzzzzzz. Thank you for tagging me.
    Yogesh Sukal
    02/04/2017 #4 Yogesh Sukal
    Inspired as the poetic interaction was buzzing between @Ken Boddie and @Dean Owen ...
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    02/04/2017 #3 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    WOW! An amazing poem this one is @Yogesh Sukal
  13. ProducerDevesh 🐝 Bhatt
    TRUTH? - by Devesh Bhatt
    TRUTH? - by Devesh BhattDestroyer of lies?Redeemer of eyes?Evident to the wise?If denied, a surprise?A subconscious treatise?A conscious compromise?The best advice?Needs no disguise?One can't summarise?One can't improvise?Is it relative? Is it absolute?Does it need context...
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    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    02/04/2017 #21 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #20 food for thought. I think Everybody feels they are greatly misunderstood, some just stop caring and are satisified if thigs get done.
    siraj shaik
    02/04/2017 #20 siraj shaik
    #11 "Yet we all have read, seen witnessed people being misunderstood". And "the best advice, needs no disguise".. quotes to note.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    01/04/2017 #19 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #18 its good to feel brilliant without knowing the answers. Thanks :)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    01/04/2017 #18 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Brilliant! This is undoubtedly one of your best.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    01/04/2017 #16 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #15 i got this thought, when i visited a court :) thanks a lot for the support.
    Gerald Hecht
    01/04/2017 #15 Gerald Hecht
    @Devesh 🐝 Bhatt All but the last couplet are queries...a most interesting effect!
    Harish Daniel
    22/03/2017 #14 Harish Daniel
    Truely lovely...@Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    22/02/2017 #13 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #12 when do i get to read you?
    Prahlad Rao
    21/02/2017 #12 Prahlad Rao
    Excellent lines.
    I like your structure of all poetry, you select appropriate picture, write from your heart and conclude elegantly. Perfect flow, brilliant!
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    05/02/2017 #11 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #10 how you see me, how I see myself and who I am,
    The conflict exists for each of us at some phase of life.

    We have the sources the feedback and the self assessment, yet confusions, shallow self understanding or denial just slip back in unannounced many times.

    True the information would come onscreen, perhaps even assess and predict our actions based on segmentation. Yet we all have read, seen witnessed people being misunderstood.
    siraj shaik
    05/02/2017 #10 siraj shaik
    #4 In general opinion over observations (awareness and experiences gained from LinkedIn) some disguise.. with different masks that are easily wearable with someone's face, a fancy name, variety profile and digital access id.. unfortunately with a mask on share a digital shake hand and with other mask click on block .. And the notification is wonderful it streams info what's going on with and giving alerts.. A try on simple easy SEO will give search results and scrolling a few pages (a review on text & images) open everything of "some or many who are part of our own network". Yeah digital Cache is indeed smart. Tech is growing and no one can over ride to suppress.. No one can hide their "who am I" but it will be an open book where with all trends a tap keys on will bring everything and all info on screen.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    22/01/2017 #9 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #7 wonderful post.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    22/01/2017 #8 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #7 wonderful post.
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    22/01/2017 #7 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Devesh, here's one of my poems on truth. Enjoy it:)

    Beauty of Truth

    O, goodness results in goodness!

    So, let the beauty of truth influence you

    for it has latent and apparent strength

    to alter life, with pivotal purpose.

    And, truth can be well understood when

    misconceptions are exposed, with its crookedness

    And, let this be the dictum prime in life—

    ‘Truth alone liberates from ignorance and arrogance’.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    21/01/2017 #6 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #5 yes, but I wasn't talking about others, I was talking about myself.

    The intro is always disguised followed by an admission of the real thing.

    I'm direct in very few posts, including yours.

    Had to learn it to have initial access, not comfortable but do it anyway. Frequently in the domestic market.
    Adam Weedy
    21/01/2017 #5 Adam Weedy
    #4 Great point. A lot of articles are so soft.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    21/01/2017 #4 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #3 but so much of disguising is needed on social media :(
    Adam Weedy
    21/01/2017 #3 Adam Weedy
    The best advice needs no disguise. Great line.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    21/01/2017 #2 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #1 I hope to :)
  14. Producerdebasish majumder
    LANGUAGE, A BOUNTY NATURE REVEALS!
    LANGUAGE, A BOUNTY NATURE REVEALS!Nature’s venture in our planet Earth With numerous signals, having no dearth To convey her message To create and procreate A unique process with grand rhythm She displays her audacity in her own realm! In nature all...
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    Aaron Skogen
    28/03/2017 #13 Aaron Skogen
    Wonderful poem @debasish majumder! I love this:

    "Human beings possess the finest form of signals for exposure
    To communicate with many with their composure
    Languages of multiple amplitude, a delectable pulchritude
    Bears a testimony of elegance with tribute
    Unitedly we can stand though in diversity
    Language alone can act as a bonding tool with grand harmony!"

    I think it embodies all forms of human communication, a touch, a word, a smile. Great post!
    Savvy Raj
    27/03/2017 #12 Savvy Raj
    Lovely! @debasish majumderish .Shared.
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    25/03/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Language is nothing but a set of words that can make or break harmony. Another honey-filled poem. Thanks @debasish majumder
    Cyndi wilkins
    25/03/2017 #9 Cyndi wilkins
    Actions speak louder...another knock out of the park @debasish majumder....
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    25/03/2017 #8 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "Language alone can act as a bonding tool with grand harmony!" Most definitely, language is our grandest achievement. And we do need to stay aware enough to use it for harmony.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    25/03/2017 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Very timely, @debasish majumder. We have a choice "Language alone can act as a bonding tool with grand harmony!: vs "Language could be equally bane If we utilize it with disdain To discriminate and humiliate".
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    25/03/2017 #6 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    language to spread bliss yes to that @debasish majumder
  15. Producerdebasish majumder
    ELEGY OF DEATH!
    ELEGY OF DEATH!I am a dead body I have been kept in a mortuary For peoples to pay their homage Life itself has been construed as a maze Which trigger us to roll on with amaze? Afterwards I will be taken to crematorium Where with lot of...
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    Mohammed A. Jawad
    24/03/2017 #19 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Ah, death, the bitter truth of life, how well it tutors its own reality!
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    24/03/2017 #18 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    that is so beautiful @debasish majumder, you keep on spoiling us with your poems, thank you
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    24/03/2017 #17 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Very interesting - a different slant on death/life. Well done, @debasish majumder.
    Gerald Hecht
    24/03/2017 #15 Gerald Hecht
    #14 @Gert Scholtz yeah...I think that is what has been done here.
    Gert Scholtz
    24/03/2017 #14 Gert Scholtz
    @debasish majumder I am going to use words so simple compared to yours Debasish: You bring death to life in this extraordinary poem!
    debasish majumder
    24/03/2017 #13 debasish majumder
    #12 decent style to nullify, certainly you are an axiom to emulate @Pascal Derrien!
    Pascal Derrien
    24/03/2017 #12 Pascal Derrien
    Probably not appropriate but i smiled while reading this another good one ☺
    Gerald Hecht
    24/03/2017 #9 Gerald Hecht
    This reminds me of a "poetry of engagement thingie" that I wrote last night --overcome with restlessness upon finding it too hot too sleep:
    --
    Mysterious --yet who can deny it's tangibility?

    There is no yardstick --no altimeter to inform/quantify the distance twixt engagement's eternal meaning ....resonating, quivering subjective sensations
    and...

    ... the sea level atmospheric pressure at some blindfolded choice...
    ...of Cartesian abscissa/ordinate intersection...
    ...what Euclidean plane can explain...
    ...the shrinking distance between the crow's nest of the mast...
    ...and the sea (as she sails away) from one's heart...
    ...or the inverse growth in spatial separation --quite inseparable from her shivering return?
    ---
    --gerry
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    24/03/2017 #8 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Lovely essence of flora

    They themselves produce an aura

    This is how perhaps mortals

    Makes life on Earth immortals!

    This is the spirit that I enjoy reading dear @debasish majumder View more
    Lovely essence of flora

    They themselves produce an aura

    This is how perhaps mortals

    Makes life on Earth immortals!

    This is the spirit that I enjoy reading dear @debasish majumder. Thank you Close
    Juan Imaz
    24/03/2017 #7 Juan Imaz
    nice poetry!
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    24/03/2017 #5 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    Love this. Thanks for sharing.
  16. Producerdebasish majumder
    IN COMMEMORATION OF POETS!
    IN COMMEMORATION OF POETS!Poets are of weird faculty They are obsessed to create verses with enlightening audacity Out of their imagination to pave the way for engendering new realm A prodigy, which is a rare asset, paving us to emerge the only creature in...
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    Laurent Boscherini
    23/03/2017 #14 Anonymous
    #11 beautifuly stanced @Donna-Luisa Eversley ;)
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    23/03/2017 #13 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Poetry is eternal and divine 🤗 Once again beautiful poem @debasish majumder
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    23/03/2017 #11 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    Poets are people.
    You and me.
    Our stories in verse.
    which may not rhyme sometimes
    But stories we retell
    all the time.

    ***Thanks for your commemoration of poets @debasish majumder
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    22/03/2017 #9 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    This is very beautiful and a tribute to all poets worldwide that ever lived, loved and will live, and love. Beautiful @debasish majumder
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    22/03/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is a beautiful tribute to poets. Yes, "Poetry is eternal" and "They hone their skill to express their legitimate rule". Perfection, @debasish majumder.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    21/03/2017 #7 Tausif Mundrawala
    This is perfectly meant for all us poets. A poet knew no boundaries and can explore unexplored territories. You have covered all the parameters required to become a poet and none of the attributes were left. What an excellent way to celebrate the art of poetry and a praising piece for all the poets.

    Excellently penned. My words seem ineffable to describe the standard of this poem. Thanks for sharing my friend, @debasish majumder
    Gert Scholtz
    21/03/2017 #6 Gert Scholtz
    @debasish majumder A commemoration of poets most poetic. Superb writing Debasish!
  17. ProducerHervé Sabattier
    World Poetry Day - Journée Mondiale de la Poésie
    World Poetry Day - Journée Mondiale de la PoésieToday, 21st of March is World Poetry Day. It was declared as such by the UNESCO in 1999, to promote reading, writing, publishing and teaching of poetry throughout the world. In order to celebrate this day, here is an homage, in five...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    21/03/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    This is a lovely tribute to all poets everywhere @Hervé Sabattier.
    debasish majumder
    21/03/2017 #7 debasish majumder
    what a grand tributes to the poets @Harve Sabattier! enjoyed read with heart's content. thank you very much for the share.
    Hervé Sabattier
    21/03/2017 #5 Hervé Sabattier
    #3 Thank you Gert. Double thank you, by the way, for it's you who gave me the idea of a collection of poets/poems, further to your recent post on the beepoets....
    Thank you again and have a nice day...
    Hervé Sabattier
    21/03/2017 #4 Hervé Sabattier
    #2 Oui Pascal, du beau monde... Et quelle belle musique ! Vous l'entendez ?
    Gert Scholtz
    21/03/2017 #3 Gert Scholtz
    @Hervé Sabattier Thank you for this Herve. I find it fitting that one of my favorite poets publishes poems about world poetry day!
    Pascal Derrien
    21/03/2017 #2 Pascal Derrien
    du beau monde @Hervé Sabattier :-)
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    21/03/2017 #1 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Nice List of poem's here @Hervé Sabattier Happy World Poetry day.On beBee everyday is world poetry day because of awesome poets like @Gert Scholtz @debasish majumder @Pascal Derrien @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. Ken and Kevin and many many more awesome bees ❤
  18. ProducerMiriam Barnaby

    Miriam Barnaby

    20/03/2017
    VANAM
    VANAMThis was my second attempt in poem writing :-) You might have a spare minute to read it :-)  Thanks and have a great Monday, wherever you are and whatever you`re doing... :-) Lisa 🐝 Gallagher,Devesh Bhatt, Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman Paul Walters 🐝...
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    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    21/03/2017 #9 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #8 Perfect photo!
    Miriam Barnaby
    21/03/2017 #8 Miriam Barnaby
    #7 Thank you very much @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher , happy you like my poem and the art work of a to me unknown author. I thought is was just the right picture to complement the poem. Best wishes :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    21/03/2017 #7 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Lovely poem @Miriam Barnaby! Did you do the artwork too? You have a talent for writing poetry, very seductive :)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #6 Miriam Barnaby
    #1 @Tausif Mundrawala :-) I very much appreciate you inspiring comment, thank you :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #5 Miriam Barnaby
    #2 Happy you like it @🐝 Fatima G. Williams, thank you :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    20/03/2017 #4 Miriam Barnaby
    Thank you very much for stopping, @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman#3
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    20/03/2017 #3 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Lovely piece and beautifully crafted.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    20/03/2017 #1 Tausif Mundrawala
    My soul is falling into the darkness of your eyes. This was written excellently. Your poems are a depiction of the art where an enthusiast keeps flocking to the art gallery. Thanks for sharing and tagging me, @Miriam Barnaby
  19. ProducerDevesh 🐝 Bhatt
    A LOVE SONG - by Devesh Bhatt
    A LOVE SONG - by Devesh BhattBeauty is a breath of fresh air,Which smells of love that you and i share,For the mountain breeze that waves your hair,As the night makes dreams of each nightmare.Beauty is what the mighty river sings,A soulful tune that only love brings,Till our...
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    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    17/03/2017 #4 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Beautiful poem 🤗
    Diwakar Diwi
    17/03/2017 #3 Diwakar Diwi
    brilliant lines.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #2 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #1 its actually Nainital, my birthplace. And thanks a lot.
    Pascal Derrien
    16/03/2017 #1 Pascal Derrien
    for a second I thought it was Dublin bay in the visual :-) thanks for the shout out and that's a beauty of writing piece it is really the first paragraph :-)
  20. ProducerDevesh 🐝 Bhatt
    I MUST FLOW -by Devesh Bhatt
    I MUST FLOW -by Devesh BhattIn the depths of my knowing,I see my true self flowing.Where the knowing keeps on growing,And the growing  nurtures knowing,Confusions are no more annoying,But a thoughtful way of going.So i flow,with the currents of senses,Armed with logical...
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    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    20/03/2017 #26 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #25
    I am aware that i must embrace
    The glowing light and the shady space
    Consciously move through unconscious ways.
    Observing how revelation plays
    A forced attempt to rhyme what thoughful Melissa Says :)
    Melissa Hefferman
    20/03/2017 #25 Anonymous
    #19 I suppose what I meant by that statement is that I've become aware that 90% of my unconscious mind rules the 10% that thinks it's thinking, and therefore my Life. And that 90% comes form everything I've ever read, seen, experienced, etc... and so it is with each of us for the most, but not all because biology can differ, part. It is therefore good to excavate all the strange things up in that shady space, and embrace change. But then again, that's just my purpose as contemplated in my own current flow, the dynamics of differing keys may strike an entirely new chord! :-)
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    19/03/2017 #24 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #23 yes, in the depths, mostly :)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/03/2017 #23 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #22 It must be stuck deep down inside this gnarly brain somewhere LOL.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    19/03/2017 #22 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #21 You already do :)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/03/2017 #21 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    "For the purpose of the journey, I know I must flow." Me too!
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #20 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #17 which one..please share again. Maybe i focused on one line to forget the whole message. Maybe i see it completely now.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #19 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #18 no you didnt. If that is the case by your scale, the majority are copying it from here and there

    I also remember, we understand things as we please, doesnt that yield originality?
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #18 Anonymous
    Maybe I stole it! Apparently I steal 90% of everything from something else, and at most times I don't even know it! Mindfields.ha
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    17/03/2017 #17 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    @Devesh 🐝 Bhatt I remember which one! hahahaha #16
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #16 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #15 i will also share the feeling with thw pebbles on the street, something i enjoyed in a poem by someone else, i cant seem to remember which one.Maybe @Donna-Luisa Eversley but i dont recall which one . It wasnt about the pebble but that line really hit me.

    Have an awesome creative, enjoyable and a memorable time .

    Thanks a lot for the rhyme.

    Feels like those poetry sessions or qawaali, perhaps the freestyle hiphop duels , only that the meaning keeps expanding not punched down.
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #15 Anonymous
    #14 So carry on and share that feeling with every Soul you meet today, and with every step you take. Even pebbles can create Waves. On shores they break, and perhaps one day we shall all embrace the land Awake! :)
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    17/03/2017 #14 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #13 whatever the state of mind, it is the evergrowing kind, it may give a vision, it may turn me blind.
    But it rather be organic, than the one assigned, cause i will know where i came from, and where i am at, perhaps enjoy the feeling
    I am not a labrat. Even if i were
    I would fail to concur :)


    Your comment has made my morning and my day worth the wake :)
    Melissa Hefferman
    17/03/2017 #13 Anonymous
    Flow is a state of mind, of the most sublime kind. Harness it for business, say some current languages, pyschology of psyche, for cortex higher productivity and profitability. Be here Now sing Spiritual masters, lets overcome Humanities disasters. The poet though, the musicians and the Artists, they've always set Sails in flow; there's no Sale needed to grow.

    And, I Love this. I flowed a response, because I felt like it! Terrific Thursday wishes to YOU! Flow on!
    Joyce 🐝 Bowen   Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    16/03/2017 #12 Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee
    #11 Thank you @Devesh 🐝 Bhatt. I have found that if I view everyone as a teacher, I will learn far more.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #11 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #10 this one is emerging as something special. Thanks a lot.
    It is an inspired piece.
    Maybe i work out something as good as yours with my uniqueness someday.
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #9 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #6 thank you
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    16/03/2017 #8 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    #7 having flow is amazing. But the absence of it isnt bad. Thanks
    Laura Donnelly
    16/03/2017 #7 Laura Donnelly
    @@Devesh 🐝 Bhatt flow is the important part of life - how to get out of our own way! Nice work.
  21. Producerdebasish majumder
    TIME AND SPACE, AN INTRIGUING EPISODE!
    TIME AND SPACE, AN INTRIGUING EPISODE!I may be eulogized I may be condemned Though I am a product of time and space Which enable me to construe my own realm? Which is a sheer disgrace? Instilling ego and vanity on me Making me disintegrated from the majority...
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    Gerald Hecht
    31/03/2017 #21 Gerald Hecht
    Absolutely transcendent @debasish majumder ; Thank you for tagging me ...another gem!
    Gerald Hecht
    30/03/2017 #20 Gerald Hecht
    #18 @Mohammed A. Jawad yep! agreed! Thank you for tagging me @debasish majumder
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    24/03/2017 #19 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Superb writing, @debasish majumder. "Humanity is not an individual’s concern". I find this line timely because as individuals we should be concerned about humanity but together we can do so much more.
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    17/03/2017 #18 Mohammed A. Jawad
    Pensive reflections. ..time to ponder, examine self and surroundings for bettering lives!
    Qamar Ali Khan
    17/03/2017 #17 Qamar Ali Khan
    Beautiful work @debasish majumder as ever! Wonderful articulation of words and thoughts! Thanks for sharing!
    debasish majumder
    17/03/2017 #16 debasish majumder
    #15 thank you very much madam @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc. for your consistent support and appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    17/03/2017 #15 Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc.
    that is a beautiful message @debasish majumder, thanks for your creation!
    debasish majumder
    17/03/2017 #14 debasish majumder
    #13 thank you sir @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee for sharing your valued comment. i guess, external and internal, both are continuously complementing each other and always in a process of changing the qualitative and quantitative values of both, resulting in sometimes as weird manifestation to us. however, we are naturally being endowed to adapt with the available system,. consequently an organization too evolve and to ensure its sustainability it is necessary to adapt as well innovate a strategy compatible for its existence.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    17/03/2017 #13 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    I am just a product of time and space

    What an irony I fanned with my self-praise

    Where actually external conditions are primarily responsible

    For my perpetual extinction with disgrace, a subject of utter despicable!

    Nice and flowing thoughts dear @debasish majumder. However; I find myself asking all self-organizing systems do that from within and without asking for permission to self-organize. They adapt to the environment and exchange energy with it but then self-organize. Are we only responding to the external conditions, or go a step further to self-organize? I feel this topic is worthy of further study.
    Fran 🐝 Brizzolis
    17/03/2017 #12 Fran 🐝 Brizzolis
    Interesting reflection ... But as Calderon de la Barca said in his famous work "life is dream":

    The king dreams that he is king, and he lives
    With this deceit commanding,
    Disposing and governing;
    And this applause, which receives
    Borrowed, in the wind writes,
    And in ashes it converts
    Death, misery!
    That there are those who try to reign,
    Seeing that he has to wake up
    In the dream of death?

    The rich man dreams of his wealth,
    What more care he offers;
    The poor man who suffers
    Their misery and their poverty;
    The one who begins to thrive dreams,
    Dreams the one who tries and pretends,
    The one who hurts and offends dreams,
    And in the world, in conclusion,
    All dream what they are,
    Although no one understands it.

    I dream that I am here
    Of these prisons loaded,
    And I dreamed that in another state
    More flattering I saw myself.
    What is life? A frenzy.
    What is life? An illusion,
    A shadow, a fiction,
    And the greatest good is small:
    That all life is dream,
    And dreams, dreams are.
    Juan Imaz
    17/03/2017 #11 Juan Imaz
    nice!
    Deb🐝 Lange, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    17/03/2017 #10 Deb🐝 Lange, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    Collectively we thrive ! Thanks for sharing !
    debasish majumder
    16/03/2017 #5 debasish majumder
    @Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. Brand Ambassador beBee, Inc., @Jianlan Li, @Marcos Vinicius Fernandes Ferreira, @Emilia M. Ludovino,@Melissa Hefferman
  22. Producerdebasish majumder
    TIME AND KNOWLEDGE, A UNIQUE CRESCENDO!
    TIME AND KNOWLEDGE, A UNIQUE CRESCENDO!We have various clocks Some are mechanical Some are electronic Some are atomic Tick tock, all moves with vogue As per available epoch Some may have human design To gauge time to align Who will fathom time? To...
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    Maria Teresa Redondo Infantes
    15/03/2017 #28 Maria Teresa Redondo Infantes
    #26 Tank you to much
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    15/03/2017 #27 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Where knowledge thus enriched by your poem with dedicated fervor! This one goes out to you @debasish majumder Keep buzzing. 🤗🐝🤗
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #26 debasish majumder
    #23 thank you very much @Cory Galbraith for your appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Lada 🏡 Prkic
    15/03/2017 #25 Lada 🏡 Prkic
    I can only say that your poetic language is unique. In your poems, I always find new words that help me expand my vocabulary.
    Cory Galbraith
    15/03/2017 #23 Cory Galbraith
    Debashish, clearly you have a talent for this kind of writing - raw, emotional and impactful. Certainly unique on social media. Keep them coming!
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #19 debasish majumder
    #17 thanks a lot @Pascal Derrien for your continuous support and appreciation, triggering me to write more. i am privileged and honored.
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #18 debasish majumder
    #16 thank you very much madam @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher for your cordial appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Pascal Derrien
    15/03/2017 #17 Pascal Derrien
    Happy i have dedicated some time to read this one .....precious it is @debasish majumder
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    15/03/2017 #16 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Great way to weave different aspects of time and how it can affect us personally and globally @debasish majumder. Sharing!
    debasish majumder
    15/03/2017 #15 debasish majumder
    #14 thank you very much @David B. Grinberg for your warm support and appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    David B. Grinberg
    15/03/2017 #14 David B. Grinberg
    Thanks for another enlightening and thought-provoking poem, Debasish. I'm sharing on three hives. I'd get into a discussion of "time" here but it would take too long. Keep buzzing!
    Brian McKenzie
    15/03/2017 #13 Brian McKenzie
    "Having an inherent inertia to arrest us within its ambit to camouflage
    Clouded us with a view" This best sums up our hurry up and do everything world where accomplish so very little of matter.
    debasish majumder
    14/03/2017 #12 debasish majumder
    #11 thank you very much @Gert Scholtz for your continuous support and cordial appreciation. i am privileged and honored.
    Gert Scholtz
    14/03/2017 #11 Gert Scholtz
    @debasish majumder If I can choose a speck of time in your poem it would be this: "Our ultimate existing contour and rhyme - it has been set as biological clock, within us the only prime! A masterful poem Debasish!
    debasish majumder
    14/03/2017 #10 debasish majumder
    #9 thank you very much sir @Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee for your continuous support and appreciation and sharing your valued comment. i am privileged and honored.
    Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    14/03/2017 #9 Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee
    This is a lovely poem dear @debasish majumder. It has many delightful lines. I choose these two lines to comment on:

    We address time out of our observation
    Ponder it with intense introspection

    You remind me of the The Observer Effect. When we observe something we may modify an aspect of its behavior, in response to their knowing that it is being studied. I wonder if time is subject to this effect! If yes, then time has a new definition. As dear @Sara Jacobovici is heavily interested on time and its meaning may be she has something to say.

    An intriguing poem this is indeed. Sharing.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    I find this poem delightful, especially this line "By virtue of time only we became the master of nature’s crafty texture", because will mankind ever master nature's crafty texture? Everything in the universe has rhythm but is it "in rhythm"?
  23. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Things a Newborn Should Know
    Things a Newborn Should KnowYou know life’s not in a box tied with a bow not a one size fit all not just ticking a box not a wanderlust ramble or a preamble to gamble life’s an unfolding puzzle each piece is a chapter each moment is a capture each second filled with...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    05/04/2017 #12 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #9 Thank you for reading and commenting, Tausif.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    05/04/2017 #11 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for sharing, @Milos Djukic
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    05/04/2017 #10 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #8 Thank you, Gert. I so glad you enjoyed it.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    05/04/2017 #9 Tausif Mundrawala
    Each and every word is like ringing inside my mind and not allowing any word to budge elsewhere. What an excellent piece of writing in the form of a poem.Thanks for sharing it with us, @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Gert Scholtz
    05/04/2017 #8 Gert Scholtz
    @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman "each piece is a chapter, each moment is a capture". Thanks for a really good poem Franci.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #7 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #1 I am glad you enjoyed it, Devesh.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #6 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #3 #2 Thank you, Lisa and Fatima. I appreciate your comments.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    14/03/2017 #5 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #4 You are welcome, Rod.
    Rod Loader
    14/03/2017 #4 Rod Loader
    Thanks for sharing your wonderful words @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    14/03/2017 #2 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    Lovely poem @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman 🤗👌🐝
    Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    14/03/2017 #1 Devesh 🐝 Bhatt
    I am almost speechless and thought-full. Lovely poem.
  24. ProducerMiriam Barnaby

    Miriam Barnaby

    11/03/2017
    YOU
    YOUMy latest poem for you, not necessarily about you :-) Devesh Bhatt, Melissa Hefferman,Joyce Bowen,kader abdesslam,Charlie Accetta,Jared Wiese, 🐝 adding VALUE & RESULTS,Chichi Okoye,@Yogesh Sukal,Paul Walters,Tausif Mundrawala,🐝 Fatima...
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    Miriam Barnaby
    13/03/2017 #24 Miriam Barnaby
    Thank you very much, @Tausif Mundrawala, for reading my poem and your comment :-) #23
    Tausif Mundrawala
    13/03/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    Excellently penned. Especially the line, but real you, is hiding in the sea. Absolutely. We tend to forget our inner selves bu not realizing that it needs to be nurtured more than anything else. Thanks for sharing it with us, @Miriam Barnaby
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #22 Miriam Barnaby
    #21 thank you Melissa :-)
    Melissa Hefferman
    12/03/2017 #21 Anonymous
    Wonderful! You is an uncovering and unfolding, so fluidly emerging with your poetic voice. 💖
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #20 Miriam Barnaby
    #17 biscuits and tea on its way :-) Thank you Paul.... Still laughing at the thought of you and your bike being busy all day :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    12/03/2017 #19 Miriam Barnaby
    #18 thanks for your time Lisa :-)
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    12/03/2017 #18 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Very nice @Miriam Barnaby, thanks for the tag!
    Paul Walters
    12/03/2017 #17 Paul Walters
    @aah a poem for Sunday Thank you ms Barnaby !!!
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #16 Yogesh Sukal
    Agree with you @Miriam Barnaby
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #15 Miriam Barnaby
    #14 Dear Yogesh, as someone once said, I don't write my poems, they come to me. So, I am afraid, we just have to wait and hope that it will be worth our waiting... :-)
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #14 Yogesh Sukal
    #13 You are welcome @Miriam Barnaby, your poems are amazing, we want more, thats an entreaty.
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #13 Miriam Barnaby
    #12 Yogesh, your comment touched me, happy to have a positive influence on someone's feelings. Thank you.
    Yogesh Sukal
    11/03/2017 #12 Yogesh Sukal
    Your each poetry has deep and meaningful beauty.
    To poet Miriam, continue such poetry is my entreaty.


    Inspired from.
    https://www.bebee.com/content/1279991/1157398
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #11 Miriam Barnaby
    #10 yes Fatima, let's learn to love ourselves first :-) Thank you for your time :-)
    🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    11/03/2017 #10 🐝 Fatima G. Williams
    @Miriam Barnaby This is lovely. I love the poem. You are who you are ! Embrace that and life will be beautiful :)
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #9 Miriam Barnaby
    #1 and i love your comments Kader, thanx :-)
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #8 Miriam Barnaby
    #2 thank you very much.... Thanx
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #7 Miriam Barnaby
    #3 i am sure others like you too :-) thank you for your comment
    Miriam Barnaby
    11/03/2017 #6 Miriam Barnaby
    #5 Franci, hello :-) thanx a lot , very much appreciated :-)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    11/03/2017 #5 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Amen and Bravo! This sends a wake-up call and a powerful message.
  25. ProducerTausif Mundrawala
    Tending Flowers
    Tending FlowersDonned in kirtle,tending flowers with her hands as gentle.array of blossoms arranged exquisitely,making plucked ones aware about their beauty.with their mesmerizing serenity and innocence,has won many hearts with sheer brilliance.its fragility holds...
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    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #30 Tausif Mundrawala
    #29 I think we should discuss it in detail but this column won't suffice.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #29 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #28 Yes, I just pulled up a site on fen shui and vaastu shastra - very interesting.
    http://www.vaastushaastra.com/vastuforhouse.html View more
    #28 Yes, I just pulled up a site on fen shui and vaastu shastra - very interesting.
    http://www.vaastushaastra.com/vastuforhouse.html
    Here is the link to the Lladro site
    http://www.lladro.com/home.jhtml Close
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #28 Tausif Mundrawala
    #26 I believe they have healing power too. They are considered auspicious according to fen shui and vaastu shastra. Well this topic itself is very interesting.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #26 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #25 Yes, crystal is pretty and I love it when the sunlight shines through creating beautiful prisms but Lladro has a such a softness to it and quite different from other elegant pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #25 Tausif Mundrawala
    #24 Am sorry for the loss. But crystals are great too.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #24 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #23 Unfortunately I don't. After my husband passed away, I moved several times so rather than risk having the pieces break and chip, I gave them to a dear friend. I also use to collect crystal, which I still have a few pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    15/03/2017 #23 Tausif Mundrawala
    #22 I hope its there with you now. I would like to see the pics, if you don't mind.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    15/03/2017 #22 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Beautiful and artistically crafted words. I used to collect Lladro. They are lovely and delicate pieces.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #20 Tausif Mundrawala
    #19 How wonderful it might be for you to judge all the antiques and exhibiting it. I would say, Wow! I got myself enrolled in one of the MOOC's based on this subject. My interest died down due to some reasons but after meeting you I would definitely complete this course as soon as possible.

    Stay blessed. I wish you luck for your future endeavors.
    Aleta Curry
    10/03/2017 #19 Aleta Curry
    #15 Terrific, thanks! I will message you my email; not sure if it appears anywhere on our profiles. Anyway, I realise now I should have messaged you privately in the first place, not blurted in out in public, sorry! I just got so excited!

    As to recognising it, well, I am an accredited Fine Art and Antiques valuer, after all. It would be a bit pathetic if I couldn't pick out classic Lladró!

    I didn't know it was *that* popular. We really do learn something new every day!
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #18 Tausif Mundrawala
    #17 Thank you so much for an instant reply and acknowledging the essence of this poem.
    Ivette K. Caballero
    10/03/2017 #17 Ivette K. Caballero
    @Tausif Mundrawala Very deep and exquisite thoughts! Thank you for sharing.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #15 Tausif Mundrawala
    #14 I am exhilarated to have found someone who recognized that this figurine is of Lladró. I have been a fan of this brand since my childhood as I have been observing it in advertisement columns in one of our newspapers. Celebrities were been presented and were felicitated with these figurines meant for couples.

    They have even started catering to the needs of Indians in the form of their favorite dieties statues.

    Permission granted. Do you want me to mail this poem to your email.
    Aleta Curry
    10/03/2017 #14 Aleta Curry
    I've always loved Lladró, and the detail in this beauty, 'Flowers of the Season', is exquisite. You've captured her essence perfectly in verse, @Tausif Mundrawala. If I have some time, I'd like to have your poem reprinted on a poster and displayed at the Sydney Antiques Fair. May I have your permission to do so?
    Tausif Mundrawala
    10/03/2017 #13 Tausif Mundrawala
    #12 Thank you so much, Sir. Your feedback is a topping on a cake.
    CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    10/03/2017 #12 CityVP 🐝 Manjit
    In the paraphrased classic line of "Jerry McGuire" - "You had me at Kirtle".
    Tausif Mundrawala
    09/03/2017 #11 Tausif Mundrawala
    I would like to thank you, @Joyce 🐝 Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee for reading this poem and finding it relevant. You are an exceptional writer to an extent that irrespective of length your buzzes have made me totally immersed in those written words. Appreciated.
    Tausif Mundrawala
    09/03/2017 #10 Tausif Mundrawala
    #8 This figurine needed this poem and I penned by observing it very closely. My hard work paid off. Thanks, @🐝 Fatima G. Williams
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