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I Started a Poem

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I started a poem
Can’t keep it goin
I’ve too much to do
Leavin the rest up to you
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  1. ProducerFranci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Tick Tock
    Tick Tock“Time flows the same way for all human beings; every human being flows through time in a different way.”    Yasunari Kawabata Time doesn’t stand still It’s indefinite progression It’s an irreversible succession It’s a continuous...
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    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    21/01/2017 #15 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for sharing @Milos Djukic. :)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    20/01/2017 #14 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #13 Thank you @🐝 Fatima Williams for bringing this back to life. 💐 🌷
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    20/01/2017 #13 🐝 Fatima Williams
    To thrive in the hive
    We need to be alive
    Sometimes we jive
    To Franci’s Rhyme

    Bringing this poem back to life      
    Mohamed Amroussi
    19/06/2016 #12 Mohamed Amroussi
    Tick Tack , I am your Clock , I remember you to stand up and act , thank you for sharing @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    19/06/2016 #11 Mohammed A. Jawad
    #8 @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman I am glad to know that you liked my poem. Thanks so much. :)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    19/06/2016 #9 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #5 Yes, @Ken Boddie - why does than happen? It's not fair. :)
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    19/06/2016 #8 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #7 What a lovely poem, @Mohammed A. Jawad and I love the message - "Time is fleeting and life is temporal!" Sharing.
    Mohammed A. Jawad
    19/06/2016 #7 Mohammed A. Jawad
    An inspiring poem. Here's a message: Time is fleeting, and life is temporal!

    @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman reading your poem, I wish to post one of my poems. Hope you'll enjoy it.


    THE TEXT OF TIME

    Where's the history of the beauteous world

    that published virtues in its form?

    Ah, now its an ancient in bygone pages

    which is so powerless to repeat in present times

    Enough! the world itself is heavily burdened

    and ready to disclose her chronicles

    with the sketches and summaries of evil

    and the text and themes of greater spoil.
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    19/06/2016 #6 🐝 Fatima Williams
    Tick Tock goes the clock :) Lovely Poem @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Ken Boddie
    19/06/2016 #5 Ken Boddie
    It's all in the perception, @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman. ⌚️👀 !!!!
    Tell me do, why does 15 minutes at the dentist pass so slowly and 15 minutes eating ice cream so quickly? 🤔
    Sara Jacobovici
    19/06/2016 #4 Sara Jacobovici
    #2 I can only take credit in the share @Anees Zaidi, the words belong to the poet @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    17/06/2016 #3 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for sharing @Anees Zaidi.
    Anees Zaidi
    17/06/2016 #2 Anees Zaidi
    Beautiful @Sara Jacobovici Time never waits. Either we move with it or left behind. 'Tick Tock goes the clock'. A great message in your beautiful words.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    17/06/2016 #1 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Thank you for the share @John White, MBA.
  2. ProducerKen Boddie

    Ken Boddie

    07/01/2017
    Some o' Me Poems and Proverbs - Vol I
    Some o' Me Poems and Proverbs - Vol IProducer posts are our front line business, our raison d'être here on beBee, but what about our comments and responses, the worldy statements and advice that we pass on to our fellow bees, as a statement of our appreciation of the effort that they...
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    Ken Boddie
    09/01/2017 #68 Ken Boddie
    #67 This one's purely for the photo, Lyon. I borrowed it from the owner of the house, when my wife and Indonesian family visited their old birth place in Palembang, North Sumatra. Don't even have a motor bike licence. 😟
    Lyon Brave
    09/01/2017 #67 Lyon Brave
    I used to love those little motor bikes. I had a white Honda. They are a lot of fun.
    Paul Walters
    09/01/2017 #66 Paul Walters
    #65 Ah touche Mr Boddie!!!!!!
    Ken Boddie
    09/01/2017 #65 Ken Boddie
    #62 yes @Paul Walters .....
    You can't fool a traveller,
    Who knows Indo slang.
    The trees are Sumatran,
    The place? - Palembang
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    09/01/2017 #64 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #63 haha, I can't top that. You would look awful funny as me....... We are who we are......... be glad we aren't flea's.
    Ken Boddie
    09/01/2017 #63 Ken Boddie
    #61 I am who I am,
    And that's very true,
    The night owl has spoken,
    Fair Lisa Who Who,
    But wouldn't we both,
    Be oh so blue,
    If you were me,
    And I was you?
    Paul Walters
    09/01/2017 #62 Paul Walters
    @Ken Boddie Ah the rhyming couplets composed on the back of that nifty motor sepeda. The vegetation in the background looks like Indonesia
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    09/01/2017 #61 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #48 My dearest Ken, I think you're right,
    What I'm about to say may sound just a tad trite
    The roots were pulled too early in life,
    Memories escaped and I want to know more, so...
    "The more that I read, the more things I'll know. The more that I learn, the more places I'll go."
    Thank you @Ken Boddie, "Today you are you! That is truer than true! There is no one alive who is you-er than you!"
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #60 Ken Boddie
    #59 Fatima ....
    Seven out of ten is enough for most men,
    But your ten out of ten has me floating like zen!
    🐝 Fatima Williams
    08/01/2017 #59 🐝 Fatima Williams
    @Ken Boddie I can't wait for Vol - II

    This buzz was so much fun.
    I felt like I'm under the sun
    A mood lifter
    A pretty good one.

    🤗I see why your Ken
    Your good with the pen
    I'll give you ten on ten
    You're so much fun 🤗
    Mamen 🐝 Delgado
    08/01/2017 #58 Mamen 🐝 Delgado
    #57 You got it!!!
    😂
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #57 Ken Boddie
    #55 Thanks, Mamen.
    Happy to always be your .... tickly toes? 🤣
    Devesh Bhatt
    08/01/2017 #56 Devesh Bhatt
    Yes, he is good at fusion without confusion in the operatic sense :)
    Mamen 🐝 Delgado
    08/01/2017 #55 Mamen 🐝 Delgado
    Glad we found each other
    in this world of ones and zeros,
    my dear friend from the Antipodes
    you will always be my ...
    😉 😘
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #54 Ken Boddie
    #53 Ha Ha, Devesh. Should we start negotiations, as yet, with Andrew Loyd Webber?
    Devesh Bhatt
    08/01/2017 #53 Devesh Bhatt
    #51 the hard works already done,
    More can follow, all in fun :)

    But sometime later I guess , if it's ok
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #52 Ken Boddie
    #46 'Wisdom' in this case, Mohd, is definitely in the mind of the beholder. I'll settle for wry humour.
    Our comments are our way of feeding others ..... and, in some cases, providing them with an opportunity to see an alternative path.
    Robert Burns (the Scots Bard) captured this uniquely with his poem "To a Louse", when he penned the following:
    "O wad some Power the giftie gie us,
    To see oursels as ithers see us."
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #51 Ken Boddie
    #47 How about you do all the hard work, Devesh, and I'll do the peer review. 😂
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #50 Ken Boddie
    #45 Thanks for sharing my buzz, Ali. Not many of us remember comments from others, or even from ourselves. My melancholic-anal character, however, has resulted in me documenting quite a lot of my own comments, including the rhyming ones. As is evident from the above, however, I don't always take care to record or remember the originating post. 🙁
    Comments received from others are, of course, preserved in my posts.
    Ken Boddie
    08/01/2017 #49 Ken Boddie
    #44 Thanks Tejas 👍
    Your OKs click,
    Is pretty slick.
  3. ProducerDevesh Bhatt

    Devesh Bhatt

    19/12/2016
    THE THING ABOUT PHILOSOPHY - by Devesh Bhatt
    THE THING ABOUT PHILOSOPHY - by Devesh BhattThe thing about Philosophy,It's wonderful to read.To apply for self improvement,Not judge another's deed.The thing about Philosophy,It's pleasing to the ears,As a reference for morality,Not critique of one's peers.The thing about Philosophy,It's...
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    Devesh Bhatt
    05/01/2017 #10 Devesh Bhatt
    #9 I have to write many many more
    Lyon Brave
    05/01/2017 #9 Lyon Brave
    Another good poem. Do you plan to submit these for publication?
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    26/12/2016 #8 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    #7 Hi @Devesh Bhatt, I chose the words "Judge and critique," from your poem. There is nothing wrong with 'stripping down the double talk," as you put it.
    Devesh Bhatt
    26/12/2016 #7 Devesh Bhatt
    #6 @Lisa 🐝 Gallagher... Please feel free to judge or critique.
    This is.more an outcome of introspection...i have repeatedly picked up words and judged/critiqued people on the basis of philosophy, in a country where almost everyone is a philosopher. Philosophy blends into the normal like its doing on social media.
    I wasnt the one being judged, but the one stripping down the double talk...made for an inconsistent timeline in my career.
    Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    19/12/2016 #6 Lisa 🐝 Gallagher
    Not to judge or critique (The thing about Philosophy). Well written, and your point came across very well. Thank you for this @Devesh Bhatt!
    debasish majumder
    19/12/2016 #5 debasish majumder
    i have shared my views in Li about your lovely poetic skill @Devesh Bhatt! i am glad that you are in the beBee to share your unique talent. i am privileged and to be mentioned by @Deb 🐝 Helfrich! i wish you will soon garner accolades in this lovely platform from numerous bees and be treated as a distinct one too in terms of writing poetry. warm welcome to beBee.
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    19/12/2016 #4 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    #1 I'm in awe of your mention considering me a poet, @Deb 🐝 Helfrich. I love to mess around with words and have a lot of fun with posting poems on my WordPress site. The fun part is @Donna-Luisa Eversley joins in and adds to my poem with hers. We will have to bring more of that to beBee. We also need to add @Ken Boddie to our list of those that like poetry.

    Welcome to beBee @Devesh Bhatt.
    Devesh Bhatt
    19/12/2016 #3 Devesh Bhatt
    Already connectes to all and thanks a lot.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    19/12/2016 #1 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    As a Philosopher, I am going to have to think some more about the thing about Philosophy.

    Glad to have another poet about the hives, @Devesh Bhatt.

    The first 3 poets on beBee that come to my mind are @Hervé Sabattier, @debasish majumder, & @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman - as you are a newbee, you may want to check out their work and learn from a few great wordsmiths!
  4. Phil Friedman

    Phil Friedman

    29/10/2016
    Phil Friedman
    Brevity Is Over-Rated
    www.bebee.com AND SHORT AIN'T ALWAYS SWEET... Sometimes to express a great idea... Takes more than just a Tweet. Phil Friedman in If I Do Say So Myself Some...
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  5. ProducerKatja Bader

    Katja Bader

    07/09/2016
    We are all poets
    We are all poetsWhen did you write your last poem? Last week? Ok, then you need not reading this article. In your youth? You think you can not write poems? Everybody can write poems. And we do not want to publish them in the newspaper. You can write a...
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    debasish majumder
    29/10/2016 #8 debasish majumder
    nice post @Katja Bader. articulately narrated about poems and its significance in ones life! enjoyed read. thanks for sharing the post.
    Katja Bader
    02/10/2016 #7 Katja Bader
    Thank you, Oscar. So I think you know how it is to feel a "flow". In german we call it to have a "flow". I hope in english, too. It means to fundirse con algo, olvidar todo lo que te rodea y quien eres. It sometimes happens to me when I am playing the piano or when I am drawing very concentrated. It is a really great feeling and makes your brain free from everything.
    Oscar Montejo Rodriguez
    02/10/2016 #6 Oscar Montejo Rodriguez
    Durante muchos años escribia canciones y se a lo que te refieres cuando lo relacionas con la meditación. Entras en una concentracion tan grande que es como si estuvieras en trance. Cambie la poesia por la prosa, pero no descarto volver a ella algun dia..... Me has hecho recordar, Katja. Gracias!
    Katja Bader
    11/09/2016 #5 Katja Bader
    Thank you @Deb 🐝 Helfrich, Donna-Luisa Eversley and @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman for your nice comments.
    For me reading poems is a pleasure, too. I love the poems of Pablo Neruda, Juan Ramon Jimenez and many others. Unfortunately in Germany it is not popular to read poems.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    07/09/2016 #4 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    One of my college crushes was simply because there was this guy who walked up and said : "Hi, my name is Dave, I am a poet." Well, you won't be surprised that he had little trouble pulling..... We worked together in the library and I got to watch this performance dozens and dozens of times. Makes me wonder if he's still doing it? But at the same time, I'd prefer to stay in the 80's and believe rather than find out via a quick google if it turned out differently.
    Donna-Luisa Eversley
    07/09/2016 #3 Donna-Luisa Eversley
    Thanks for tagging me @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman ...yes everyone has a bit of a poet within.. 😉
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    07/09/2016 #2 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    Sharing in I Started a Poem, Poetry, Amateur Poetry Corner
    Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    07/09/2016 #1 Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman
    I can relate to this post. I love to write poems - some are silly, some show emotion, some rhyme and some don't. I like to relay a message in my poems or tell a story. In other words, I am all over the place with them. My favorite are haikus.

    I own a hive titled "I Started a Poem" where someone starts a poem and others finish it. In fact we have several bees that write poetry. Interesting post and I like your poem at the end. @Donna-Luisa Eversley @Ken Boddie @Deb 🐝 Helfrich @debasish majumder @Chas ✌️ Wyatt