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Mental Health - Schizophrenia

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  1. ProducerHervé Sabattier
    Carry me
    Carry meYou come from the lovely country of your childhood Its sweet gardens and its runlets of innocence You come from the broken heart of a brotherhood Growing in absence, half little girl and half silence When night was coming down,...
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    Hervé Sabattier
    30/11/2016 #18 Hervé Sabattier
    Nice! Congratulations!... You know, and it might surprise you, but I prefer writing in English than in French, for many reasons that would be too long to expose here. But, alas, I am more limited in English, in regard to vocabulary and therefore nuances, and it comes easier for me to write in French. But don't you like my poems in French? They are from the heart too, you know. And in poetry, music is as much as important as meaning, whatever the language. Anyway, should you need any translation, explanation or clarification when you read a poem in French, whoever the author, I would make a pleasure providing you with it. Have a nice evening.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    30/11/2016 #17 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    #16 Je comprends un peu de francais. And I lean on google translate where necessary. J'ai passé deux étés à l'Institut Catholique au sixième pendant l'université.
    Hervé Sabattier
    30/11/2016 #16 Hervé Sabattier
    @Deb 🐝 Helfrich, Hi Deb, don't you read French? I am so sorry, but being French native, I am more easy in French. But I promise to write a nice poem in English soon.
    Hervé Sabattier
    30/11/2016 #15 Hervé Sabattier
    #14 Thank you Deb. It touches me. I believe you're right, and the only true gifts come from the heart. All my poems come from my heart, it's my only secret.
    Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    30/11/2016 #14 Deb 🐝 Helfrich
    "And bring me all the gifts that only you can bring" A great poem, @Hervé Sabattier. Love is the expression of the unique gifts to be shared between two souls.
    Hervé Sabattier
    27/07/2016 #13 Hervé Sabattier
    Thank you for your nice words Pamela. Well, I trust it's just a question of love. It's a love story. Though the love from a daughter to her father is certainly different than the love from a lady to her lover or her husband, at the end it's still love. Only love. Only love remains. And to really love, you need to remember and see the world through your child's eyes...
    Pamela 🐝 Williams
    27/07/2016 #12 Pamela 🐝 Williams
    As I read your poem @Hervé Sabattier I had the thought that it was about a young child and the safety that a father brings to them. Then as I read it was the relationship between a man and woman. Then I had the thought; it could be both. The feelings a young girl has for her father is what she looks for in the man she spends her adult life with, that allows her to come in contact with the young girl within the woman. Beautiful! I loved it made me think all of this.
    Margaret Aranda, MD, PhD
    24/07/2016 #11 Margaret Aranda, MD, PhD
    #9 Ahhhh. I beat you to it, so sorry but not really, as I wrote an entire Buzz using Google Translate...sorry for that hit. BUt even with the computer program, the translation was super startling in its depth. And I have requested a translation not just for me, but at your decision so we can all see what you see. Here's the English translation, choppy yet pure: https://www.bebee.com/producer/@margaret-aranda/the-miracle-of-love and I was inspired to write my own poem in response, however un-elegant in English, sir @@Hervé Sabattier, please forgive me: My Subsequent Poem: The Gift at Bay: https://www.bebee.com/producer/@margaret-aranda/the-gift-at-bay . What love in the beeeHive reigns today!
    Hervé Sabattier
    17/07/2016 #10 Hervé Sabattier
    #8 Thank you Joanna... Poetry is emotions, only emotions... Nothing to understand, only emotions to feel... And Neruda is in my top 5 poets...
    Hervé Sabattier
    17/07/2016 #9 Hervé Sabattier
    #7 Melissa, please read my poems in French. Should you pick up one whose music sounds nice to your ear, tell me and I would write an exclusive and poetic translation, only for you...
    Hervé Sabattier
    17/07/2016 #6 Hervé Sabattier
    #4 Thank you Gert.
    Hervé Sabattier
    17/07/2016 #5 Hervé Sabattier
    #3 Thank you Melissa.... Did you catch the breathing on this one too ?
    Gert Scholtz
    16/07/2016 #4 Gert Scholtz
    Herve - this is a stunningly beautiful poem!
    Hervé Sabattier
    16/07/2016 #2 Hervé Sabattier
    #1 Hi Chas. Thank you, it touches me. It makes me happy to know you enjoy. Thank you.
    Chas ✌️ Wyatt
    16/07/2016 #1 Chas ✌️ Wyatt
    You are a gifted writer and I really enjoy reading your poetry and prose.