Neil Smith

Neil Smith

7/1/2019 · 2 min read · ~10 · 7
To Poetry and 5 more
Debasish Majumder

Debasish Majumder

7/1/2019 · 2 min read · ~10
To beBee in English and 5 more
ELEGY OF BIRDS!

ELEGY OF BIRDS!

Crow, Sparrow, Linnet and many birds Being summoned by Pigeon with an ardent urge ‘Please listen my dear friends and kindly gather Humans always stare at us and clatter Expressing their envy and utter Birds of same feather flock together...

Jerry Fletcher

Jerry Fletcher

Debashish This is deja vu all over again for me. Like it Just as much this time.

12/1/2019
CityVP 🐝 Manjit

CityVP 🐝 Manjit

Saw this poem back in mid December - while that poem is in my Poetics hive, it does not link to the main page. I am assuming you have resubmitted this one. The comments from the prior submission are still available. https://www.bebee.com/group/poetics

11/1/2019
Lisa Gallagher

Lisa Gallagher

20/7/2017 · 1 min read · ~100 · 11
To Poetry and 15 more
Debasish Majumder

Debasish Majumder

19/7/2017 · 1 min read · ~100
To beBee in English and 15 more
DESTINY OF BIRD AND BEES!

DESTINY OF BIRD AND BEES!

A little boy once caught a bird Its freedom being snatched Being captivated in a cage Not knowing when and how its appetite surge Out of natural trait he offered the bird food Out of inadequate water and food It started to express its grudge in...

Preston 🐝 Vander Ven

Preston 🐝 Vander Ven

Another great poem. Sometimes we humans craving 'honey' in life, we become this 'poor bird' ourselves. Captive, Unknowing, and Awaiting the door to be open for the honey. Yet, we are unaware the 'cage' we put ourselves in is open on the other side the entire time.

14/1/2019
Debasish Majumder

Debasish Majumder

thank you very much sirAli 🐝 Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee for continuously showering your adulation and consistent support to me. i am privileged and honored sir.

20/7/2017
Renée 🐝 Cormier

Renée 🐝 Cormier

28/12/2018 · 1 min read · ~10 · 11
To Poetry and 12 more
Pascal Derrien

Pascal Derrien

20/12/2018 · 1 min read · ~10
To Lifestyle and 12 more
Excuse Me If I Am Not Sorry

Excuse Me If I Am Not Sorry

It used to be only when my world was grey that I didn’t know what to say It used to be overly fractal until I realized it had become emotionally horizontal I used to say I wish I would never grow old that I would never grow bold but really I...

Pascal Derrien

Pascal Derrien

thanks CityVP 🐝 Manjit this is a very comprehensive comment and I am glad you took time to lay out your thoughts about the You and I 🧐

23/12/2018
CityVP 🐝 Manjit

CityVP 🐝 Manjit

The challenging part of this for me is in recognizing that the YOU and I is the same person and what creates uncertainty in this stream of consciousness is the doubt that the I here is more wiser than the You. That is a different view than the YOU-YOU and OTHER-YOU I outlined in my buzz "The CityVP Window" https://www.bebee.com/producer/@cityvp/the-cityvp-window which is the personal rather than impersonal relationship with the other you (relationship). This buzz touches the Monadic aspects in the CityVP Window.

That power of self-reflection should be viewed as the I that is You and the You which is actually the Image of You. That image of YOU is only separate from the I by the way we have taken onboard what our experiences gave us, as well as what the image or hope we have for ourselves that is either not the "I" we are or the "I" we want to be. So for sure, just explaining what I am reading here leaves a guessing game, but that is the absolute value of this buzz - the whole purpose of a self-reflective experience is creating clues and guesses that we can then peel away.

So it is not important to know exactly what we mean so long as the thing we run with is not running from our own truth. Only you know what the I and You is when it is unentangled - but so much better than being entangled by our thoughts and provide no escape routes for self-reflection. I like the starting image, I am a great fan of the finger of inner peace.

23/12/2018
Pascal Derrien

Pascal Derrien

30/10/2018 · 1 min read · ~10 · 6
To Poetry and 7 more
Debasish Majumder

Debasish Majumder

27/10/2018 · 1 min read · ~10
To beBee in English and 7 more
HUMAN'S INHUMAN EFFORT!

HUMAN'S INHUMAN EFFORT!

Universe is an utter enigma In its fetus Innumerable stars engender in chorus With numerous galaxies it alone adorn What a grand echelon it alone construes as champion We only bemused to watch its grand celestial panorama in our vision!...

Edward Lewellen

Edward Lewellen

Excellent!

29/10/2018
Geoff Hudson-Searle

Geoff Hudson-Searle

Wonderful buzz Debasish Majumder and so good to see Stephen Hawkin, an amazing man. To express the reflections with delight, an intersting statement. When we continuously go through our lives the same way, we inevitably block the chance of changing things for the better. By becoming more self-aware, we are able to have a better understanding of what we truly want in life. Naturally, this involves making changes, whether they’re significant or menial. Of course, nobody likes change. It’s uncomfortable and scary, and we seek comfort in what we know. While trying to decipher the reasons behind certain behavior often leads to confabulation, focusing on our immediate emotional reactions instead may serve us better in our quest for self-knowledge, as they are often a more direct reflection of actual attitudes. In the process, we should also be open to inconsistencies between our gut feelings and our preconceived, and seemingly rational, notions. In the end, a single observer with only a few faulty tools in your toolkit will produce dubious data. We need to go beyond introspection, and expand our toolkit towards self-knowledge.

28/10/2018
Debasish Majumder

Debasish Majumder

13/11/2018 · 1 min read · ~10 · 6
To Poetry and 6 more
Savvy Raj

Savvy Raj

13/11/2018 · 1 min read · ~10
To Writers and 6 more
The Shape of Things.

The Shape of Things.

SHAPING An Artwork by Savvy Raj There is in the shape of thingsA reason whyLike the night and the dayPhoto by GEORGE DESIPRIS on http://Pexels.comThey say nothing is accidentalThere is always a shape to thingsA reason for designA reason for...

Lada 🏡 Prkic

Lada 🏡 Prkic

Dear Savvy, I said it more than once when commenting poetry that I am not much a poetry person, but when I hear music and rhythm in words, it's a sign that a poem resonates with me. I hear music in your beautiful words that make me want to re-read them again and again. Happy and prosperous New Year full of poetry.

1/1/2019
Savvy Raj

Savvy Raj

Honoured you think you dear Franci . Wishing you and yours and all here a beautiful and blessed New Year!. 

1/1/2019

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