Debasish Majumder en beBee in English, Writers, Creative and Media Professionals Administrative Assistant • Vimarsh Development Solutions Private Limited. 3/3/2018 · 1 min de lectura · 1,2K


Wind, you are amazing 

 And truly confusing 

 With an immense velocity 

 You express your audacity 

 You enable to defoliate leaves from plants

 You facilitate pollination to grow in abundance 

We salute you for such intriguing acceleration 

 Where you adamantly extricate all hindrances with élan!

 I wonder why we can’t emulate you to frame 

 To eradicate us from all chain 

 And make all efforts which subjugate us in vain

 Whether friends or foe

 All should be embraced with warmth and glow

 Emphatically express our presence like the way you blow!

 Pressure, immense pressure we feel upon us

 You are only responsible for all our fuss 

 We may fill you with impurities 

 Just to restrict your pace with malicious crudities 

 We cannot get rid of your overbearing gesture

 As you alone work as a catharsis on our aperture!

 Pressure, whether high or low You attune yourself and blow

 Making our ambiance amenable and glow, What a mystic flow!

 I wish to blow before you 

 To promote my vision with an exquisite hue

 Surpassing all hindrances and emphatically declare

 We human are supreme out of all creatures in rapture! 

 Alas! Wind form inside me too Causing distress, not allowing me to move freely 

 Obstructing like glue I cannot breathe Wind around me acting like writhe 

 Restraining me like an abstract fetter 

 I am truly no longer better!

 Yet, I aspire to have velocity higher than wind 

 My cerebral trigger me to express my vision with glare 

 With a mission to do betterment for mankind with flair

 I dedicate myself to serve for humanity, my only obsession 

 Not to cause harm to mankind 

 Not to be myself too ruined!


 Cool breeze soothe me in hot climate 

 Hot wind warmth in reverse trait

 I, mere an object having no match with the speed of wind

 Still I dreamt of a dream Surpassing the speed of wind and brim 

Where I can create a realm

 With no discrimination, no anomalous whim!

 I wonder who are you, wind? 

 Why if we act against you, we will be ruined? 

 Why you offer a unique flavor, engulfing us

 For which life on Earth create all clamor and fracas?

 Enigma you too bear 

 Which trigger us to go beyond you, we love to endear! 


Lisa Vanderburg 5/3/2018 · #11

You've captured the power of something so awesome, we cannot pinch it between our fingers @Debasish Majumder - what a trail you blaze with it!

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Randall Burns 4/3/2018 · #10

Great poem @Debasish Majumder with wonderful imagery!

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Debasish Majumder 4/3/2018 · #9

#4 thank you very much madam for continuously supporting me with your valued comment and commendation. i am privileged and honored.

Debasish Majumder 4/3/2018 · #8

#7 thank you very much my dear sir @Ali 🐝 Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee for your continuous support and appreciations. i am privileged and honored.


n addition to the comment of @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman, beBee Brand Ambassador- I may add that the poem and image are powerful and in synchronicity. The image reminds me of brainstorming. Here we have very strong wind blowing our brains. Nobody has explored this storm with your eloquence. May be we need an expansion of the term brainstorming. Thank you dear @Debasish Majumder for blowing my mind with your refined poem.

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Louise Smith 4/3/2018 · #5

Now I don't wonder where the wind blows
Lots of movement
Great @Debasish Majumder

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I can feel the wind while reading this powerful piece @Debasish Majumder. Outstanding lines:

"Still I dreamt of a dream

Surpassing the speed of wind and brim

Where I can create a realm

With no discrimination, no anomalous whim!"

The image you selected is powerful in itself.

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