Debasish Majumder en beBee in English, Writers, Creative and Media Professionals Administrative Assistant • Vimarsh Development Solutions Private Limited. 3/3/2018 · 1 min de lectura · 1,2K


Wind, you are amazing

And truly confusing

With an immense velocity

You express your audacity

You enable to defoliate leaves from plants

You facilitate pollination to grow in abundance

We salute you for such intriguing acceleration

Where you adamantly extricate all hindrances with élan!

I wonder why we can’t emulate you to frame

To eradicate us from all chain

And make all efforts which subjugate us in vain

Whether friends or foe

All should be embraced with warmth and glow

Emphatically express our presence like the way you blow!

Pressure, immense pressure we feel upon us

You are only responsible for all our fuss

We may fill you with impurities

Just to restrict your pace with malicious crudities

We cannot get rid of your overbearing gesture

As you alone work as a catharsis on our aperture!

Pressure, whether high or low

You attune yourself and blow

Making our ambiance amenable and glow

What a mystic flow!

I wish to blow before you

To promote my vision with an exquisite hue

Surpassing all hindrances and emphatically declare

We human are supreme out of all creatures in rapture!

Alas! Wind form inside me too

Causing distress, not allowing me to move freely

Obstructing like glue

I cannot breathe

Wind around me acting like writhe

Restraining me like an abstract fetter

I am truly no longer better!

Yet, I aspire to have velocity higher than wind

My cerebral trigger me to express my vision with glare

With a mission to do betterment for mankind with flair

I dedicate myself to serve for humanity, my only obsession

Not to cause harm to mankind

Not to be myself too ruined!

Cool breeze soothe me in hot climate

Hot wind warmth in reverse trait

I, mere an object having no match with the speed of wind

Still I dreamt of a dream

Surpassing the speed of wind and brim

Where I can create a realm

With no discrimination, no anomalous whim!

I wonder who are you, wind?

Why if we act against you, we will be ruined?

Why you offer a unique flavor, engulfing us

For which life on Earth create all clamor and fracas?

Enigma you too bear

Which trigger us to go beyond you, we love to endear!


Lisa Vanderburg 5/3/2018 · #11

You've captured the power of something so awesome, we cannot pinch it between our fingers @Debasish Majumder - what a trail you blaze with it!

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Randall Burns 4/3/2018 · #10

Great poem @Debasish Majumder with wonderful imagery!

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Debasish Majumder 4/3/2018 · #9

#4 thank you very much madam for continuously supporting me with your valued comment and commendation. i am privileged and honored.

Debasish Majumder 4/3/2018 · #8

#7 thank you very much my dear sir @Ali 🐝 Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee for your continuous support and appreciations. i am privileged and honored.


n addition to the comment of @Franci🐝Eugenia Hoffman, beBee Brand Ambassador- I may add that the poem and image are powerful and in synchronicity. The image reminds me of brainstorming. Here we have very strong wind blowing our brains. Nobody has explored this storm with your eloquence. May be we need an expansion of the term brainstorming. Thank you dear @Debasish Majumder for blowing my mind with your refined poem.

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Louise Smith 4/3/2018 · #5

Now I don't wonder where the wind blows
Lots of movement
Great @Debasish Majumder

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I can feel the wind while reading this powerful piece @Debasish Majumder. Outstanding lines:

"Still I dreamt of a dream

Surpassing the speed of wind and brim

Where I can create a realm

With no discrimination, no anomalous whim!"

The image you selected is powerful in itself.

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