Pascal Derrien en Lifestyle, beBee in English, English Chief Executive Officer • Talent Cloud Media 11/12/2017 · 2 min de lectura · 3,5K

It's a Bit Like When......

It's a Bit Like When......

it's a bit like when......  
It really feels like winter on a cold morning of December
Causing mutual bother, two lovers avoid looking at each other
If they were to take a moment to reflect, they would undoubtedly stumble on a perfect regret
Besides, If they were to let their emotion run on empty it would not be plain sailing it would be plain silly
Can't afford a one way ticket to animosity city, can't spend a first class upset on honesty

I's a bit like when......
You realize you don't need a start gun to begin the run
If she cant kiss the sun how would she ''catch the moon''  
It' would be like fooling around with a wooden spoon
The question is, how desperate was she to join a new platoon

It's a bit like when.....
You turn to me and say if there is no money there is no journey
But what if I can't pay, can I still participate
Even if it sounds like its too late, can I please beg you not to leave me at the gate

It's a bit like when.....
All the life chores, press or grind, are shaking off your precious mind
Its a bit like you have become obsessed at the idea of being left behind
You say, what if there is nobody else to find

I's a bit like when......  


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Pascal Derrien 14/12/2017 · #29

#28 ah thanks @Hervé Sabattier Chief Poet in residence :-)

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Hervé Sabattier 14/12/2017 · #28

Ah ! This is true poetry !

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Pascal Derrien 14/12/2017 · #27

#26 ah @Louise Smith I am not sure about talent its a bit more like a song form the Mezingers '' Everybody wants to get famous but you just want to get a dance in the basement''. For the article it is probably all that but once it's out it can be anything people want it to be I have no control over it I cannot be prescriptive, personally I have 4 or 5 interpretations of it. What I can say is that it started when I spotted a couple in a park having a ''come to jesus'' meeting.. thank you for the comment and kind words :-)

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Louise Smith 14/12/2017 · #26

Hi @Pascal Derrien you are one of the not so hidden talents of beBee emerging from the hive ...

It's a bit like when
- someone's leaving?
- there's a relationship breakup?
- you're feeling negative about the future ?
- you are in limbo waiting for the future to emerge?

or all of this ?

I love the art where is it from?
I couldn't find

NICE TOUCH "Produced for beBee only"
I want to see cowboys & indians in your next post !

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Pascal Derrien 14/12/2017 · #25

#24 thanks @Devesh 🐝 Bhatt the song aspect crossed my mind too maybe not everything is exploitable but let me know how you get on :-)

Devesh 🐝 Bhatt 14/12/2017 · #24

Makes me want to make it a song.

Have to arrive at something original. It is very easy to jump to a JJ Cale type tune.

On second thought JJ Cale is not that easy when it comes to nuances, hard to jump on that.

If she cant kiss the sun how would she catch the moon. Unforgettable

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Pascal Derrien 13/12/2017 · #23

#22 thank you @Debasish Majumder I hope not but I am not taking anything for granted 😀

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Debasish Majumder 13/12/2017 · #22

nobody dare to leave you in the gate dear @Pascal Derrien! what a lovely post! enjoyed read and shared. thank you for the share.

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