American Grammar Checkup: Issues with Gender-Neutral Pronouns
Years ago, I remember talking with a friend who was (and still is) deep into technology. I admired her ability to keep up with it, because technology moves so quickly, and I also remember mentioning something about being happy to work with a topic that hardly ever changes â American grammar â because I didnât have to wonder if I was on top of the latest trends and information.
But English usage is changing faster than I would have expected. Lately a topic that has risen to the top of many lists of âHow should we do that?â is using gender-neutral pronouns, especially âthey,â when we donât know the gender of the sentenceâs subject.Â
This usually occurs when weâre writing instructional guidelines, telling workers how to do their job. We canât know if a female or a male will be the person doing it, so we need a way to write without making false assumptions.
In my âBrush Up on Your Business Writingâ workshops, I have always given the following guidelines to help others see different ways to write without using he/she, he or she, or s/he, all of which call attention to themselves and interfere with a readerâs ability to read smoothly.Â
Maybe one or more of these will help you as well.
1. Rewrite using a noun only, not a pronoun.
  NO: When an analyst writes a report, he should . . .
  YES: When writing a report, an analyst should . . .
2. Repeat the noun â if itâs a short one.
  NO: When an analyst writes a report, he should . . .
  YES: When an analyst writes a report, the analyst should . . .
3. Use a relative pronoun.
  NO: An analyst in Iowa earns less than he would in New York.
  YES: An analyst in Iowa earns less than one in New York does.
4. Phrase the words as a directive.
  NO: An analyst should write all her reports in plain language.
  YES: Write your reports in plain language.
5. Use plurals whenever possible.
   NO: When an analyst writes a report, he should . . .
   YES: When analysts write reports, they should . . .
Now itâs 2017, and the plural pronoun âtheyâ is allowed to take the place of he/she, at least in English. When can we use it? Should we use it? Who says we can?
My thought is that we should try really hard NOT to use it when the subject is singular; they is a plural pronoun and it is supposed to reflect back to a plural subject. I would rather write so that I donât have to use any pronoun when I donât know the gender of the sentenceâs subject.
Now if I DO know the gender, I use he or she as necessary. For more on that, click here.
My goal is to make sure that we writers are seen as smart by our readers. In business writing, which includes blog posts, we should be doing our best to keep our writing smooth and not clunky.
If this post helped you in any way, please let me know why in the comments section. And I would certainly appreciate your sharing it with your connections, so they can learn as well.
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